Reviews for The Wizard and the Lonely Princess
Guest chapter 13 . 11/5/2019
Will Harry be meeting the Mane six at any point?
Guest chapter 6 . 11/5/2019
Is this a Dumbles bashing fanfiction?
Mernom chapter 27 . 10/17/2019
How did Myrtle wake Harry up if his spirit is off on the moon when he's asleep?
Mernom chapter 16 . 10/15/2019
the two big issues I have with this story (and feedback) so far are:

1) lack of scene separation. The entire chapters are written as one big lump, with no scene seperstion, which makes it difficult to identify mini-timeskips. For example, I had to reread the part where Nightmare found Fluffy for the first time, to realize that the conversion only continued on the moon. A scene break there would make it much more readable.

2) lack of POV consistency. I don't know what is the official term for this, but when I refer to that, I mean that when a scene is written under a certain POV, the only information revealed in that scene is information they is visible to the POV character/s. In my experience this does wonders to immersion in the story. Examples are the flying lesson chapter, when the POV switches to Hooch and back unannounced.
While it's not absolutely necessary under every circumstances, it greatly helps in most cases.

A smaller complaint is about compelty not bothering going into the magic system, but that could just be me being a major fantasy/sci-fi mechanics nerd.
Crainium9 chapter 4 . 8/1/2019
Merry not happy
Derpidot chapter 14 . 6/6/2019
I keep cracking up randomly while reading this imagining a nightmare moon muppet.
Verdauga chapter 32 . 2/21/2019
Well, I'd never have imagined such a crossover being imagined, but I'm glad it was. You did a fantastic job blending these worlds together, and I'm immensely glad to have had the pleasure of reading it. Now I shall move onward to the next.
Verdauga chapter 30 . 2/21/2019
Casual Unicorns.
Verdauga chapter 29 . 2/21/2019
Little Horse, Big Horse.
Verdauga chapter 25 . 2/21/2019
Verdauga chapter 10 . 2/21/2019
Horse swears are great.
Verdauga chapter 9 . 2/21/2019
Because it's fun is fair.
Verdauga chapter 4 . 2/21/2019
Yay! Christmas and Feels!
Verdauga chapter 2 . 2/20/2019
Verdauga chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
No, you're imaginary!
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