|Reviews for Punishment Game|
| Hex169 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Aww. Man dont stop this here it's really good please write more to this story I really think that it's great!
| xSakuraRosesx chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
This was amazing. Totally in-character.
| The Norveyan chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
*Stands around, almost in own keii-mode*
Simply, beautiful. I love this kind of thing, you captured the characters perfectly and made them as real as ever in such an awesomely cute and delightful situation, please write more of this kind of thing!
| GitahMuttan chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
LOL! Hahaha! Awesome. But it seems that it isn't the end!
| The Minister of Silly Walks chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
:'3 I loved it. Thank you so much for this amazing birthday present Cuz it truly was amazing! 8'D The setting was so funny, clever, and it made me blush / I must applaud Shion for taking such a bold step on Mion's behalf. I like how slow the build-up was to the actual kiss. It was like one long drum-roll ever increasing in volume before the huge fluffy climax! Mion's resistance was perfectly played out and as per usual I could appreciate her want to escape from the situation because you wrote it so well. And now on to the actual kissing scene. Ohhhhh boooooy that was awesome! OwO That was the best kiss I've ever laid my eyes on (that sounded...odd...but anyway). It just escalated so well from tentative, gentle kissing that was enough to get Mion thinking "Mweehhhh this is fun /" And when the kiss broke, leaving Shion (and I suspect Mion as well) feeling dissatisfied, I loved how she forced him to get back into it. It was cute :'3 I love Mion's girly side so much. And by the end they both seemed to really get into it which I loved. I bet Keiichi was kind of heart broken when it all ended and Mion was just like "Was that good enough? Can we stop now?"
My favorite part was the bit about how she could feel Keiichi trembling. Oh how I would love to see that happen in Kira ;_; -crosses fingers-.
And now moving on to the end. That last scene in the classroom while Keiichi and Mion were cleaning up were tense for me to read. I could feel the awkwardness between them xD. I thought it was fitting how you made Mion make a few more valiant attempts to keep up the tom-boyish front when she kept scolding him for "staring at her butt." That's classic Mion right thar D always trying to make poor Keiichi feel as uncomfortable as possible. But in the end she finally confesses. So all in all...Best. Punishment. Game. Ever! D and I loved it so much! Et amo tu! You made me feel so special on meh special day with those shout-outs Thank you for working so hard on this. I'm saving it to my computer :'3 so whenever we can't talk I can read it and think of how unfathomably awesome you are :'D
TTFN - Ta, Ta For Now
| Michael S. Repton chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Excellent; although the kiss scenario was predictable from the outset, once you got into it the emotions were deeply touching and really well described. Every time I read one of your Mion-centred stories I end up feeling I understand her a lot better than I ever did in the series. And I *loved* the awkwardness after the kiss, because it was very realistic, very convincing and very funny - and I knew it was going to be building up to a lovely heartwarming ending, and of course you didn't disappoint.
Hope you will always keep writing, your stories are special :)
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
*winces at f word* Cute. Excellent. Oy hooray. Perfect.
| Crimso chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Hello, it's good to return to reviewing your fanfictions! I'll get to catching up on your main fanfiction in just a bit, but right now my mind is a bit of a mess. I promise you that I will get to reviewing, though. In any case, I'm going to move on. I think that this fanfiction was written amazingly, as I have commented on your previous fanfictions many times before. Honestly, you have talent! Er... how many times have I told you that? I bet you're probably sick of me saying that. But it's true! I honestly can't wait to go back and read your main fanfiction. I just need a little time to clear my head.
I thought it was nice to read another fluffy fanfiction, as I love fluff! Yeah, I hate to admit it, but I'm a huge fan of these fluff fanfictions. MionXKeiichi especially! Actually, MionXKeiichi is the only fluff I really like, I think. I don't follow many pairings now. Ah, sorry, I'm getting off track. In any case, I love that you wrote another fanfiction like this. Mion seemed very in character, as I'd expect her to act just like that in a situation like this. Once again, I do think Shion is the type of person to try to control her sister and her love life using whatever means she can. It's just for her sister, though. I doubt Shion is trying to cause too much embarrassment. Er... maybe not, actually. At first I thought that Shion would try to make them do something um... sexual. Then I realized that as manipulative as Shion may be, she certainly wouldn't make them do something too extreme.
Ah, Keiichi, he's so... dense. Man, he thought that she was just acting? Of course she wasn't acting! Man, that guy. At least he did kiss back when Mion kissed him. Ah, the kiss was amazing! So fluffy, so well written, so... . I can't even find the words for it. But it's positive, I swear. Mion grew a little bold there, now didn't she? It's something I can certainly see Mion doing, so it was certainly believable. Keiichi being dense is also something I can see. That guy doesn't seem to see other people's feelings, now does he? Gosh, Keiichi! If someone acts that passionate, even if it is a punishment game, they probably like you! It really does seem like he likes her back, though. He just doesn't realize his own feelings.
Now, I must read this fanfiction again.