Reviews for Helpless
Royalraven007 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
awwwww so many mixed emotions. That was really well written, I wish you would space it out a little though, it would make it easier to read, double space perhaps? I absolutely love the story but it is so sad that at the moment of death she remembers a way out. T_T so sweet and so sad. Congrats, you did an excellent job in bringing emotion to your story :)
snapelily chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
oh my goodness this was so well done. i don't usually leave reviews but the ending was perfect.
Cocoa-Akane chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
OHMIGOD! GOOD JOB! YOU SUCCESSFULLY MADE ME CRY! it was beautiful...
dax-fox chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
I loved it. The story was beautiful and fast paced, it had a certain breathless quality that emphasised the shortness of Lily's life because it was like a string of events flashing by until it was over with a bitter taste of sadness and regret. Beautiful.