|Reviews for Hidan and Itachi are Creepers|
| INeedSissors61 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Such funny storys keep it up _
| HeartsNaruto chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Haha! Lol! I'm gonna be singing this nonstop now! Great story! Poor Hidan! I've done that before! It hurt! It was funny though! This was hilarious!
| theabominablesnowmansassfur chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
I have a couple comments, hope I can make them constructive for you :D
In my opinion, it was a bit heavy on dialogue...consider putting in a bit more explanations and descriptions? Otherwise it feels a bit like we're reading a play script. Oh, and also, maybe add some spaces after every new line, rather than just having it in single-space form, especially with lines of dialogue.
Content wise...well, it was quite funny. lol, some interesting lyrics to those songs. A few grammatical errors, but nothing too bad, just a bit of incorrect punctuation(i.e., ending questions with a period as if they were statements, a common mistake.) Overall though, pretty good attention to technicals. I did have a bit of comments on characterization though-for example, I noticed Kakuzu was swearing just as much as Hidan-which is quite out of character. Also, I highly doubt he'd attack Hidan-he really never physically harms him canon-wise. But I understand this is a humor fiction, so OOC is tolerable xD
Hope I helped a bit :D