Reviews for The Next Journey
jeremy4114 chapter 30 . 10/24/2015
This story by far is my most favorite princess monoke story I wish it didn't end. Awesome story thanks
Insane Days and Evil Laughs chapter 1 . 4/24/2015
I got part way into your fic. before I had to stop. Your plot seems great but honestly I think that you need to rewrite this because the writing is ... sub-par. With more explanation (of everything, places, people, motivations, actions, scenes...) and told from the perspective of a character I think that this fan fiction could be truly great instead of just okay. If you ever do any changes I would love to read it.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/15/2014
I love the story so far, but I would like to point out a small inconsistency in the story concerning the vial of medicine. In the last chapter it was written that a spirit wolf grabbed the pouch containing the vial from Ashitaka and dropped it. Thereby shattering the vial. In the beginning of this chapter the vial is whole and Ashitaka dropped it, causing it to shatter. I just wanted to let you know incase you were not aware or had a reason for this. Keep up the amazing work!
Abeishere chapter 27 . 7/15/2014
Hey when will u make a another chapter I love this story da best
Gabba Podda chapter 24 . 3/31/2014

your story is awesome.
One of the best I had ever read - the change of the characters and their developement, the up and downs (especially with Oda Nobunaga) and so on.
That prove that you are a very good writer. :)

In the last chapters I found a few spelling errors, I think you should improve your control a little bit. ;)

I hopefully see the next chap soon.

Gabba Podda
Guest chapter 19 . 10/5/2013
I like the way you bring Kaya to Ashitaka and yet San did not act crazy or furious about the situation. But it is so sad for San. Poor San! I hope Ashitaka could explain to her soon or comfort her. I feel sorry for San since she must be hurt badly. I also believe that is how the way Ashitaka's personality is, when it comes to love, he could end up hurting both of the girls just because he didn't want to "say anything to hurt her". Anyway, really want to see what will happen next.
Guest chapter 19 . 10/4/2013
Not many people realize that Kaya is actually Ashitaka's fiancé, and The scene Kaya meet with Ashitaka is very true to their characters. Poor San , though. It's very sad! San is hurt. When will Ashitaka comfort her? Or maybe tell her he loves her too? I hope bad thing will not happen to San. Looking forward to your update soon!
Eli chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
Thank you so much!
rysmith73 chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
you have to update soon... please...
rysmith73 chapter 24 . 2/7/2013
Rose Suicidal chapter 24 . 2/2/2013
love it please update
rysmith73 chapter 22 . 1/6/2013
I seriously love this story! please update with a new season!:)
Guest chapter 20 . 7/4/2012
This intricate story is fascinating. The author has incorporated a couple of Miyazaki's ideas, knowledge of different dimensions, and still kept the essence of San and Ashitaka. Very well done. I never thought about taking the more political war side of the story and making it the focus of the 'sequel'. Very well done. Keep writing and posting, the story's not over yet. :)
Blah chapter 20 . 3/6/2012
Oh sweet jesus! More please!
Shimotsuki no Miko chapter 20 . 2/22/2012
Wow! This ones really great! I can't believe that for 20 chapters there's only 2 reviews! I mean, come on!

Can't wait for next chapter
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