Reviews for Communication Breakdown
Inferna Blossom chapter 9 . 6/24
Woah. That was just...woah.
Inferna Blossom chapter 8 . 6/24
Oh hells yeah. Here we go. And good on you for making it clear that everything's consensual. That's important and lacking in way too many items of the same kind of material.
Inferna Blossom chapter 7 . 6/24
Oh, well there's a surprise.
Inferna Blossom chapter 6 . 6/24
Huh. I didn't expect the cure to be milk.
Inferna Blossom chapter 5 . 6/24
Yeah, to distract her. You keep telling yourself that, Soul.
Inferna Blossom chapter 1 . 6/24
This is going to be interesting and fun.
Well damn chapter 9 . 1/4
Damn, this was good. This was so adorable and obviously perfectly sexual and Jesus, Maka did that pelvic dance at the end and it was just
Damn gurl. You rock dem hips maka.
Soul was such a gentleman in the horniest of wways. XD
NetterBetter chapter 9 . 12/6/2014
This was just... *ovaries explode into oblivion*
hokshi chapter 9 . 11/16/2014
I was just gonna leave since I left an overhwlingly emotional comment on one of your other fics but the I just couldn't stop thinking about this after I read it and now i wanna read it all over again. you have some sort of talent with intensifying every sensation of whatever situation they end up in and I end up with tears in my eyes and pains in my chest. I love how drawn out everything is in the first few chapters, because personally I enjoy the hot foreplay more so than the actual horizontal line dance and the curt but effective dialogue was just a beautiful icing on the cake or truffle or some sort of other sensation enhancing drug so good on you. thank you for the feels
RosesAndRavens chapter 9 . 6/18/2014
Omake? When?
alldaylong chapter 9 . 5/3/2014
...this is hot… LOL
s0ulmatch3r chapter 9 . 11/23/2013
RaiiderBaybe93 chapter 7 . 6/1/2013
"Center His Fucking Chi Or Something"
My Favorite Line Hahahahaha :)
Had Me Cracking Up!
Ashbrie13 chapter 6 . 5/27/2013
This is amazing! I'm going to explode of feels.
Ashbrie13 chapter 4 . 5/27/2013
This is the best written scene I have ever read. Wow.
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