|Reviews for Communication Breakdown|
| s0ulmatch3r chapter 9 . 11/23/2013
I LOVE THIS SOUL IS SUCH A HORNY GENTLEMAN LOL I APPROVE
| RaiiderBaybe93 chapter 7 . 6/1/2013
"Center His Fucking Chi Or Something"
My Favorite Line Hahahahaha :)
Had Me Cracking Up!
| Ashbrie13 chapter 6 . 5/27/2013
This is amazing! I'm going to explode of feels.
| Ashbrie13 chapter 4 . 5/27/2013
This is the best written scene I have ever read. Wow.
| Collaborative Lady chapter 9 . 5/19/2013
Ha! Best lemons. You have a premise, and variation, and follow their thoughts through, and gosh damn it if that doesn't make them several cuts above ANYTHING ELSE. Such pathetic plotless attempts at repeadative smut these are not. Fully appreciated.
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/11/2013
i was eating bacon when i read this...
| lovedreamergrl chapter 2 . 4/27/2013
So perfect ಥ‿ಥ, ever tying is perfect from the way you can describe it so detailed and how they're feeling
| Rainy chapter 9 . 3/13/2013
So. You're telling me. That whatever you wrote for Amplify that wasn't allowed on FF and you had to put into livejournal was more explicit than this? impressive. (i didn't bother going to livejournal) Anyway, this was pretty hilarious, awkward embarrassment and all. You are really good at narrating people's thoughts, e.g. Soul trying to convince himself he has a mission to complete and trying to accomplish it but constantly getting distracted and frustrated.
| thewicked1 chapter 9 . 3/5/2013
This may be an overused premise but its the best overused premise I've ever read...
| Sylvan Moon chapter 9 . 1/17/2013
I can't seem to get enough of your fics (if you can't tell already). I found this one hilarious and enjoyed it immensely. It's always funny when Soul tries to resist and Maka is becoming quite the seductress in all your fics. Lol!
| ChibiCHICKENluver chapter 9 . 10/13/2012
I AM DEAD YOUR FANFICS KILL ME I CANT EVEN HANDLE IT
| Starzki chapter 9 . 4/9/2012
I have a hard time describing how much I enjoyed this fic. It was entertaining, funny, and really sexy. It's some of the best lemon/smut/porn/descriptor-you-prefer that I've read in a while. It also managed to stay true to their relationship.
Let me just say that I've been reading this over the past week or so, and when I've been in frustrating situations and needed time to find My Happy Place, my brain took me back to this story. It always worked like a charm.
Thank you for writing this and thank you for sharing it.
| striginesensibility chapter 9 . 1/14/2012
Marsh, you are amazing. I keep getting all of your fics mixed up because they're all so good haha. I absolutely love the way you write Soul. He sounds exactly like my headcannon says he should.
| songstar13 chapter 4 . 1/5/2012
Gah. Stupid Soul and his Stupid self-control. He shoulda had a whole chocolate too, damn it. Though it is entertaining to watch.
| songstar13 chapter 2 . 1/5/2012
I loved it. So so so much. Your writing has this edge of humor and smexiness all at that same time, and it makes a mind-blowing combination, my friend.