Reviews for Second Chances |
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![]() ![]() “With only a few days left until they broke up,” Nooooooooo! “For Christmas,” oh ok then. |
![]() ![]() Legal to marry giants? Jesus... oh yeah, Hagrid. |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry, i know this was posted 5 years ago, but this was AMAZING! 10/10 loved it |
![]() ![]() Absoluetly loves this! Thank you for a great fanfiction! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a good story, really. Just if you cleaned up the spelling mistakes it would be great. You kept spelling Azkaban wrong, no 's' in Azkaban. Macmillian not Macmillion. Not complaining. |
![]() ![]() Wonderful. Love it. Thank you! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT JOB! really well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, that was a nice ending, to have them wish the same for their children. Well I really liked this fic, the fast action and the length of the chapters made it a good read. Thanks for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() At first, I though this would be interesting AU fiction, but as I read, I realized, just this short chapter is to full of cliches to be as interesting as I originally believed. Also you need to check though your stories more thoroughly because the mistakes you make would be easily avoided by just rereading your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honest truth? I liked this epilogue more than the original one for many things. First of all, Draco and Harry are together. Second, Severus and Lily are twins (right? I maybe got lost with that). Third, it was more entertaining and the conversations... I don't know, I just liked this one more. And you can be very proud of what you wrote. I delayed a lot to read this, but I'm glad I finally did. Keep writing! And congratulations for your fic. I really loved it! Take care of yourself. Good luck. Praises. Atte: Sinattea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! I think it's great! This was a wonderful chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO much better as that crap Rowling gave us! Even if it's only because Harry and Draco are together. :p. To be honest, I've only fallen in love with this couple after HP 7.2. There, it was so obvious something was going on between them! Now, no matter what, I'm sorry this story is over, because I really really liked it! I hope to keep hearing from you! XO, Caroline |
![]() ![]() the last line is brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWWWWWWWW. Just AWWWWWWW. Completely and utterly cute and touching and making me feel as if I was floating on a sweet, nice cloud of candy cotton over a Willy Wonka's chocolate factory. Lovely. And once again, AWWWWWWWWWW 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this epilogue much better than the one in the book :) Great job! |