Reviews for TRANSFERRED: Were It Not For My Broken Heart
lyrisrose chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
That was so sad
Omg chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
Make a sequel! But Sebastian wouldn't actually do that...
Jenmoon1 chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
sniff sad
Euphoracle chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
This is very good.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Seriously, no death scene where Sebastian holds Ciel or some shit like that?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
He died having sex? Wow. I don't know if I should find that really funny or just really tragic. I'm torn.
fangirl101 chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
:'( so ciel dies... and he and sebastian never... and there's no more story? D'X
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
...were it not for my broken heart, our first time wouldn't have to be the last...

I died at this
Ohmygod this is so beautifully written and so sad... I DEMAND A SECOND CHAPTER
ariana chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
that was awesome but the last part was funny to me
sadist fangirl chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
"Sebastian, forget our contract. I'm going to be committing suicide tonight," Ciel Phantomhive said ripping off his eye patch staring down at his butler whose lips split into a smile, "What a coincidence my Lord. I was just coming upstairs to kill you."

dude really..really..really...
Ciel Phantomhive
died while having sex
Frostlesskiss chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
This has to be one of the best stories I've ever read *crying* I love it. It's touching, it's romantic, it's a masterpiece! Aww. They were together until the very end. It's so sweet. I kind of want a sequel, but this is beautiful and wonderful on it's own. Bravo! *claps* You, my dear, are one hell of a writer
flaming rose chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Of my freaking god! How could u not write a second chapter to this?! Please do! And thank you! Peace!
Anon chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
AAAAHHHHH the ending was so perfect! Well done indeed!
CrowNoYami chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
that was somewhat strange but wonderful all at once.
fanfiction fannatic chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
have you ever consider doing a sequal like maybe him turning him into a demon during ;) just a idea, i really enjoyed your story :)
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