Reviews for Unitl Death
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 3/15
Aww, great work! ;A;
Dixxy chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
Sensitivity...

Gentleness...

Warmth...

Kindness...

Emotion...

I'll treasure.

Thanxxxx to no end for this fragile Gem of Life !

/ Léo \
ladyleahrbloom chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
I really enjoyed it. I hope you feel like writing more.

Just a few wee things. There are some spelling mistakes threaded throughout the story, revise carefully and don't rush. Also, Tommy's eyes are hazel, not light brown and Izzi shouldn't be "laying" there when Tommy finds her, she should be "Lying" there.

Other then that, simply gorgeous and I would love to read more.
Nina chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Great start! I really like this so far, you should definitely continue!
Mois chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Lets made a deal, i will give you a proper review, if you finish the story

Deal?

Thanks