|Reviews for When Balance Fails|
| ShinoHina4eva chapter 6 . 4/28/2016
And there's Toph'! And Mai as a bonus! Whoo! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| ShinoHina4eva chapter 4 . 4/28/2016
Yay Sokka! I was hoping we'd get to see him soon.
I love this story so far. It sucks that Katara had to die, but it makes sense that that would happen.
Sokka and Zuko are two of my favorites in the whole series. So I love that we get to see so much of them. My only question, then is 'where's Toph'?
| Vered chapter 6 . 4/1/2016
This story's probably long been put on hold, but the darker Avatar world is done so well and I would love to see how the Zuko/Mai and Sokka/Toph reunions turns out!
| Komiv chapter 6 . 7/25/2014
Liking the story thus far! The world building you've done for the setting is really good, and I like the thought you've put into fitting the plot together on both ends. Interested to read what happens next!
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/30/2013
| Maran Zelde chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
Glad you finally updated. Sokka's side quest has earned him some new allies.
| ArrayePL chapter 6 . 3/19/2013
Thanks for updating.
| Sandra Phillips chapter 6 . 3/19/2013
Amazing chapter, as always. I eagerly await the next installment.
| AnguaMarten chapter 6 . 3/19/2013
this is like game of thrones in the avatar world. and it is awesome.
one complaint i have is that you've removed pretty much all of the humor from sokka's character. it makes sense with the setting, but it also makes him kind of unrecognizable. that humor is a major part of sokka's characterization, and i'd love to see a little bit of it.
| TheMightyErrg chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Awesome! So glad to see this being continued. Looking forward to more.
| Lord Lelouch chapter 6 . 3/19/2013
Thanks for the update, I was beginning to worry you had abandoned the story, I'm glad that you haven't.
So yo say everyone's going to be in the same city in the next chapter huh.
I can only imagine the level of hell that is going to raise. However I am curious as to what Zuko's diabolical marriage plan is. I get he's waging a psychological war with Azula but I'm sure that's not all there is to it.
As for Sokka meeting Zuko, I'm sure that Zuko would give him a run for his money on that avenue. Zuko can fight over 100 people without the use of his bending. He did that at Pouhai stronghold in season one as the blue spirit using his dao swords. I'm sure he hasn't allowed his skills to dull any. So I'm sure sokka won't be too much rouble for Zuko to handle.
| FranticHamster chapter 6 . 3/18/2013
great to see an update to this story after so much time there are very few avatar fanfiction's out there with original plots and this is one of them
| Elise chapter 5 . 2/3/2013
Very, very, very amazing, awesome and brilliant! Love it! I hope you'll continue this! :)
| Jhery chapter 3 . 2/3/2013
Awesome. I love those court politics and how suave Zuko handles them. So cool.
| Hotaru Vie Jaegerjaquez chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
You leave me a cliffhanger... Please update soon... XD