Reviews for One Piece: Rise of the Second Pirate King
ExpertoftheBlade chapter 1 . 6h ago
will luffy have a larger crew? (Excluding the females you are putting in the harem)
holmestalentsmaster chapter 2 . 2/14
continue this story please!
uzuuchi007 chapter 2 . 1/26
Nice
Shadow's Rapture chapter 2 . 12/27/2014
Love thestory for this fic and hope you decide to update this one again
hitvinw chapter 2 . 12/21/2014
loved it... more update please
iitrnr chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
Good story. Hope to see more.
iitrnr chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
Great beginning. My only complaint is that you use the word 'did' unnecessarily quite frequently. In most do those places thew word does not add anything to the sentence and ruins the flow. Thanks.
Shadow2wolf chapter 2 . 11/30/2014
Please continue writing this story is so AWESOME!
smarcelsmail chapter 2 . 9/1/2014
update soon please
Flaremage chapter 2 . 8/13/2014
I love this Luffy. He's a total badass. I like how your making this version of One Piece darker then usual. It's a nice take on it since the anime an manga seem so colorful and carefree. I'm hoping to see what you do next with this.
Chrisfragger chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
Pretty good stuff so far. though I wish it was just Luffy and Nami, honestly I think a harem takes away from the story.

Does he have the Gomu Gomu no Mi? Haven't seen it used yet...
Sun-Moon4ever chapter 2 . 7/28/2014
Please update, :)
epicfanfic26 chapter 2 . 7/13/2014
Update already!
pasopeacock4682 chapter 2 . 7/11/2014
Your writing is actually very good. I enjoy reading your story and hope for more. I would appreciate of you update more often bit I understand that sometimes fan fiction writers get caught up with life and cannot update often.
Keep up with the good work and see you with the next chapter.
Wacko12 chapter 2 . 7/11/2014
so wait is Nami the reincarnation of Rogue?
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