Reviews for Quidditch Practice
BlackElectric chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Oh, I'm not a hater. At least not all the time :D

This was quite fun, what with the face pie eater Peter and the temporarily Irish Padfoot. It was very, very short though.

It needs something added to it. Example: they go down to the pitch only to find Peter actually teaching the team to eat pie with their faces. Set up like a yoga class with each boy eating pie on a rubber mat, hands tied behind their backs and faces ducked down smothered in food. Peter walking round them all professional like giving them tips.

Yes that was crap, but the image kinda cracked me up a little. I'm sure you could think of something better to finish it off. I think with a bit more it could be a fantastic one-shot.