|Reviews for The Memory Still Lingered|
| Whoever chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
| TaiyouChan chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
It really bugs me though that you say 'the memory still lingered' about three times in such a short fic so far.
One, you said it in your summary. Two, it's the name of the story, three, it's the first line of your fic.
It's overstated for something that is so short.