Reviews for Dusk
SteveB59 chapter 29 . 3/10
I believe that you should continue writing this. It is a very well written story with a good plot.
YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO chapter 13 . 1/10
yo this is awsome
scary as fuck but DOPE
Guest chapter 6 . 7/19/2015

This is fantastic omg
f.tastarossa chapter 8 . 12/8/2014
I love those laugh XD
am I sadist?
when I imagine about it...well...very nice
eh he he he
**infect with black blood
f.tastarossa chapter 29 . 8/26/2014
yay Its a new chap! yeppy
httpkirby chapter 19 . 7/22/2014
Oh f...
Is this in relation to Alice Human Sacrifice? O.o
Brittney Winry Rockbell chapter 29 . 7/18/2014
Loved this chapter, Andrew! The description was phenomenal! Ugggh! I hate Grimsley and Madame Red so much! What they did to Edward was horrible and now they all of a sudden love him or something!? You've certainly created some excellent villains that I can hate. XD Thanks for updating and please try to update sooner next time! Your writing is amazing as always! :D

P.S. RECHS and Anime club won't be quite the same without you. Congrats on graduating and just remember that we'll all really miss you. Especially, me. Good luck at UNCG and your future endeavors. :D

Visit us soon!
FMA and Black Butler Lovers Forever! XD
Ocean Eyes love chapter 19 . 7/17/2014
This is getting creepily like Black Butler/Kuroshitsuji first you have a manipulative Hana and then a Madam Red? But then Alice comes from nowhere... like the crap?
Poisoned Sidd chapter 28 . 7/4/2014
Guest chapter 28 . 5/22/2014
Please more 3 i love it!
Guest chapter 28 . 4/25/2014
Br0kenChim3ra chapter 28 . 3/9/2014
You. Need. To. Up. Date. This. Now.
Ahaha, its a great fic so far! Of course I've got to say that I did disapprove of the frequent POV changes in the first few chapters, but that's probably because I barely ever read anything in 1st Person POV xDD
I could have sworn you based "Dr. Proctor's" name off of Dr. Proctor from Pokémon...but then you explained that it was your friend's name x3
And is Red based off of Red from Pokémon as well? Since he can't speak and all... x3
And I just loved all the references to other franchises! My first clue were the lyrics to Papermoon in the beginning x3
Oh, and one part of your fic has inspired me to draw a quick little parody comic...
You know when Ed yells at Roy, "Don't you understand the gravity of this?"
Well ((based of a meme I saw)), I thought of drawing Ed saying that and then have Roy reply, "Oh, I do," and he would be randomly levitating above his hospital bed with his legs and arms crossed. Ed was going to be like, "What the hell?!"
So yeah...please update soon! ;u;
Brittney Winry Rockbell chapter 28 . 1/2/2014
That was sooo good! I am loving this story soooo much! I'm just hoping that Ed gets his memory back soon. But I though making him out like a baby when his memory was erased was really good. Thanks 4 updating! I missed Dusk sooo much! You truly are a great writer. Please keep writing. :D
Spinatic chapter 28 . 12/14/2013
OMGod Hurry! Hurry please! Update again! Please!
f.tastarossa chapter 16 . 12/13/2013
Epic chapter!
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