Reviews for Fragile
Rei chapter 4 . 7/28
This is exactly like the feelling i had once I seen the ep " The southern raiders" , I'm sooooooooo...ANGRY wth Katara (the BITCH!) for treated him like THAT! Anyway, I like Toph even more and she was sooo cool to said against that damn mother-f cking Sugar DAMN queen! And I like Toko and Hate Zutara even more! ( Heck, they ARE even not damn fit together! Wake up Zutarians!)
Guest chapter 6 . 7/24
Awesome story. You are very good at writing the characters in different situations. I love the idea of healing having to do with chi and each bender havig a different type.

One thing though was that through out the story we barely saw Zuko as anything but ill and Katara as anything but angry so there wasn't much development in the characters except for Katara deciding to take him as a patient. You write them very well but it would be nice to see them acting like themselves. Even if the rest of the story would follow canon, I think there would be a few little differences in how they interact.
xxxrae97xxx chapter 6 . 6/15
This is a good fic, I enjoy it
That-Flying-Breadstick-Wizard chapter 3 . 5/3
InsanityIsClarity chapter 6 . 4/4
Loved it!
Squibble the WhovianBreadstick chapter 6 . 6/23/2014
...The drums in his head?

...Is Zuko the Master?
WillaWombat chapter 6 . 4/8/2014
OHYMYGOD SO GOOD LIKE WOAH I WANT MORE I'M ADDICTED. *takes deep breath*. Seriously, I LOVE this story. Will you write a sequel? It's so awesome I can't even describe it :D
Otakugirl 13 chapter 6 . 1/7/2014
This is great! No one really paid mind of how Zuko was injured by Toph in the Western Air episode. I know this has no pairings but my heart wells up with joy on how Toph was looking after Zuko. She was being responsible for her action. It was so cute and sweet! The way you describe how Katara's healing abilities work was very clever. No OOC did really well on their character. Thank you for this story.
irezel chapter 6 . 7/21/2013
ow, this is just what i wanted. thank you. :)
Ersatz Einstein chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
The ending's interesting. Is this just meant to show where it joins the continuity, or is there a sequel?
Ersatz Einstein chapter 3 . 6/11/2013
This has some annoying errors. The only one that I'd really suggest fixing is the way you emphasize words: it's not consistent. Sometimes you capitalize, sometimes you italicize, and sometimes you surround them with * *. I'm enjoying this story a lot, though.
Divanyala chapter 6 . 4/13/2013
I love how you used the names of the captains from Bleach! Job well done!
Not Particularly chapter 6 . 4/12/2013
Wow. Katara is such a bitch in this fic! Interesting idea.
Boogum chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
Yay, everything is alright again!

I enjoyed reading this!
Boogum chapter 5 . 2/9/2013
Aww, poor Zuko. That would be really terrifying to share his memories.
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