Reviews for The Lost World Tournament
Guest chapter 19 . 4/17
Firstly, why make Erasa a saiyan? If Erasa was supposed to be a saiyan why didn't she actually act like a saiyan. Goku lost his memories but, still acts like a saiyan but, purehearted. Just to say that's my only problem.
gabelou1991 chapter 36 . 4/13
Cool.
RustKnight chapter 36 . 4/8
Terrific job!

You have a great sense of humor that isn't too distracting from the plot. I even ended up liking the 4th wall being overcome so often.

Too bad Goku and Denaira were left in the other world, but I suppose there was no need for them.
RustKnight chapter 25 . 4/8
Maybe Vegito used telecommunication and ki control to talk and smack the shit out of Buu.
Renegade for life chapter 10 . 3/24
Yes! Vegeta!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/24
"sounds like my brother" that's actually true XD!
E-K chapter 22 . 10/21/2014
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL! AND I THOUGHT OVERPROTECTIVE WAS FUNNY, THIS SHOULD BE MADE INTO A FANFICTION MOVIE!
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! if you absolutely HAVE to use the k rating then why the FUCK do you need bad language...

censorship is bullshit, if you use a low rating it should only be because no such things are necessary...

thats OBVIOUSLY not the case here...

sigh i like the idea but THAT is quite a turnoff.
0 Jordinio 0 chapter 8 . 4/8/2014
Fail. She sudden;y has the power to take on Gohan? Story crashed and burned here.
Shank-GxV chapter 36 . 3/7/2014
This fanfic was [bad word] awesome! Man, I loved every chapter of it. lol

I'm going to read more DBZ fics written by you. I hope you will write more. ( 3 _ 3 )
Noip13 chapter 36 . 3/1/2014
Aww…That's sweet. This story was a mixture of hilariousness, crack, interesting twists, and romance. I'm happy that Dende and Erasa ended up together, at least, and the whole Romeo and Juliet thing was resolved. It's a sad day when Bulma is the most sane adult in a group…overall, wonderful story.
Noip13 chapter 27 . 2/28/2014
It's like Romeo and Juliet, only much, much weirder.
Noip13 chapter 26 . 2/28/2014
OH MY GOD THE HILARIOUS TWISTS
Noip13 chapter 19 . 2/28/2014
I was going to comment later, once I finished the story, but I had to speak up.

Erasa? What. Ze. Hell. I mean, this story was half-crack, half-plot before, but now…

I'll give you this…I did not see that coming. Insane, ridiculous, great twist.
Noip13 chapter 3 . 2/24/2014
"Hey, it's your birthday. You can do whatever you want."

Most. Irresponsible. Guardian. Ever. XD
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