Beast Boy: I think this is where Air Fresheners come from

lol I can imagine he'd say this while reading it :P

Oh my baby Jesus. I pushed through My Immortal by sheer will power. I thought the horror had come to a close. Oh, how wrong I was. This is truly Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Way material. Your commentary was funny though. :) Good work, but I think it may take a few days for my brain cells to recover.

headacheheadacheheadachethis storyisridiculous.
Only reason I'm still alive is the bold sentences...
horrible story. Great commentary.

Beautiful MST, made me laugh a lot :D

Oh my god this is so messed up but it's hilarious at the same time! Your commentary makes it better! Although the author is incomprehensible :p

...god id hate to be the writer of this storys english teacher.

'Thanks for helping with the Spanish!'

'Hahahaa. Si, but I c dat you are lovers wif mi enemios.' He said in Spanish.

What?

WHAT?

My God, I did that with Japanese when I was TWELVE, and that was because I didn't have Google Translate with me! *facedesk* FAIL.

You Know What They Do To Guys Like Us In Prison is actually about prison rape...

Either way, BRILLIANT!

I like to think that her SPESHUL VAMPIR POWAH is making all of the characters OOC and destroying English.

*giggles* I love this! .

PAHHHAAHAHAHAH! I love this commentary! XD Dear lord, I love how she picks lyrics from completely inappropriate songs for this! I mean, seriously? To The End is about a woman who KILLS her gay husband! (or something like that).
Dude, marry me (just don't bury me). I LOVE this!

:)

O Noes! Twila had to bring in Rose Hathway. O Noes! This is really good. I would review at the end, but my brain cells are burning, and my IQ dropped 45 points, so I better stop. I'll just need to read the last 'chapta' and see what happens. Thanks for flaming the story, I was rolling on the floor, and people looked at me like I was crazy! Anyways, great flaming, good job!

This is HILARIOUS! You should definitely make more.
I heard My Immortal was pretty bad -nudge nudge- unless you already reviewed that mistake of a book.
Anyway. Someone on Quizazz stole your review for this story and more or less changed them. Although she kept some reviews the same. I don't know if you mind or not, but if you do: 25473494/journal/286247/TWILIA-DA-GIRL-WHO-FELL-IN-LUV-W-A-VAMPIR-review-1/
You can find 2-3 in her journal.
You did not find this info from me. shhhh.

YY R U SOOO BADD ATE DEEES Fam, DIS I SHET

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