|Reviews for Look, Up In The Sky|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
MY HEART IS OVERFILLED WITH JOY OHMIGOSH THIS WAS SO AMAZING
| The Real F'n Scorp chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Alright, for starters, I have to say that I love the premise of the story being something different from the rest. I like the idea of Cas being Dean's guide and teacher as he learns how to use his "powers." That said, I should be abundantly honest and say I don't ship Destiel and don't read stories featuring the pairing on average. As such, I won't comment on the relationship between Dean or Castiel which I can already see is hinting at more than "friendship" by the manner in which Cas refuses to admit what he wants. Now this in now way reflects on you as a writer, I think you are a fantastic writer. I just don't care for this particular OTP (or Johnlock for that matter, either.).
Also, the length of this 'chapter' is astronomical in regards to what is normal range for a fanfic. I'd honestly suggest pairing it down, three chapter at 6000 words is a whole lot easier for people to read than 18,551. Again, just a suggestion :)
This here is where I really started to appreciate your writing: ((The sunrise was beautiful, reds and golds spreading over the Lawrence City skyline and Dean thought he would trade every second of it for a bottle of aspirin. "Cas, why do you keep dragging me up here?"
"Perhaps in the hope that one day you'll be sober enough to appreciate it.")). You really have a lovely play of imagery here and you have fantastic dialogue which sounds exactly like what the actors would say if this was part of the show.
This here was fantastic: ((He held his white wings curled loosely around him but Dean saw them twitch as he spoke. He knew the look of Castiel gearing up for a lecture.)). I could so easily see Cas folding his wings around him as he geared up to give Dean a talking to about his lecherous behavior.
Again, right here: ((They watched Castiel cut his wings into a sharp turn, looping around with perfect grace.)) you showcase another fantastic set of imagery. I can absolutely see Castiel as he flies in the sky, almost like a bird. It's a very beautiful image, and paints a very lovely scene.
This section was truly fantastic and I commend you for your work! Excellent job!
| zanganito chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Wow, this was a neat idea to have a superhero AU of supernatural. I like how you've incorporated parts of canon with Dean having the handprint, and Castiel being his guide, and them fighting demons. I think what really makes it work, is that they are very much in character, with Castiel being too serious, and Dean being...Dean. And of course Castiel would fly around in a business suit and Dean would stay up all night partying, but then feel guilty about not wanting to get up. The dialogue was very in-character and funny. This is a good one. :)
| Laurasaur chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
I'm so glad I read this story, Castiel was perfectly done and the spaceship scene was just magnificent
| Alexandra chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Absolutely brilliant! I cannot controll my emotions!
| Aisukuri-Mu Studio chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
How cute. ;A; How CUTE. 3333333333333
Wonderful. ;A; Wonderful. Cassie, Cassie, Cassie...
| Jamie-Destiel Leigh chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
I actually Absoloutley loved this! Amazing fic, loved every bit! 3
| kimiko chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
| JoNa chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
I love this story! Hopefully there will be a sequel in he future?
| The Mysterious Shadow chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
That was great! Please say you are going to continue this!
| Asase chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
That was beautiful! I haven't read a Supernatural AU fic before but this was amazing!
I feel like Captain Awesome is something that Dean would say sarcastically but it just stuck.
Dean worrying over Cas made me tear up but hte ending made it all better!
| SubstandardProducer chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
This is one of the best Supernatural fics I've ever read-funny, dramatic, sexy without OH LOOK PRONS. In fact, all of your SPN fics are great! I was wondering if I may draw you some fanart of this story. I'd link and credit, of course. So, may I?
| Mii-Chan 24 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Why in the hell does this not have more reviews?
Dear god, that was amazing. I made noises that most certainly not human throughout most of it.
Brilliant characterization, absolutely amazing portrayals. It was so in-character, and it just seemed so right. I'm extremely glad I found this.
You are a genius.
| It's.Funnier.In.Enochian chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
I cannot express the love I have for this! I was hooked from start to finish! Brilliant writing and an utterly fantastic job all around! ;)