|Reviews for The Give Away Girl|
| i.luv.twilight2 chapter 21 . 5/18/2012
Angela dating Edward is a bitch-tastic move. My heart aches for Bella in this story. So sad.
| chrissy87 chapter 21 . 5/18/2012
I reli wnt b and e to end up together again
Need more updates
Can't wait :( x x x
| mani12191 chapter 21 . 5/18/2012
Ugh seriously? Angela? and Edward? Was not expecting that at all. I kind of wish Bella stuck around with Tyler, he actually didn't seem like that bad of a guy. But oh boy...I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I hope we get some Edward/Bella interaction!
| TayLizSouth34 chapter 20 . 5/13/2012
| mugglemom08 chapter 20 . 5/5/2012
I don't think you could pay me to do high school again. I'm getting all tense and heart-faily just reading this. They need to have their heads knocked together, but I'm still rooting for them.
*whispers* Can you remind me who Maggie is? Mommy brain has struck again.
| Discordia81 chapter 20 . 5/3/2012
Argh, woman, these chapters are so fucking rough to get through.
Love that Charlie bought her a camera. I got a 35mm Canon when I was 16 for my trip to France with French club. I still have it, although I've switched to a digital Canon. Still use the first lens though. :)
This line nearly made me bawl. "And once upon a time, I had a real family too, even if it was only for a little while. It's nice to know that, sometimes, they still think about me too." I really want to hug Bella. It was so sweet that he brought her the food. And I agree, as much as I love leg of lamb (we had it for Easter this year) I would not want it for Thanksgiving.
Metallica makes me think of my ex-boyfriend, too. It was a loooong time before I could listen to it without getting sad. Had a total flashback to about 1996-1997 last night when I heard Smashing Pumpkin's "Eye". I remember laying in the dark in a friend's room listening to that with candles and incense lit. Moments like that DO make me miss being 16, although for the most part I am so fucking glad to be an adult.
I am glad Bella told Charlie about him drinking and driving. It was the smart thing to do. I did it once and I really, really shouldn't have. Never did it again, but I was lucky that nothing bad happened.
Edward wasn't wrong about his comment about Renee, but he had to know how hurtful it would. I understand why he lashed out, but ugh, that wasn't really fighting fair. He definitely has a right to be pissed about her her not telling him about Royce and Ben. She should have, no question about it. I am kinda glad he got a punch in on Ben!
I'm reserving judgement on Rosalie until I know more. She didn't see anything but him holding Rosalie's stuff. That could have meant anything. I can understand why it would hurt so bad though. She's the last person Bella wants to see Edward with. But, Rosalie isn't necessarily with him, nor is she necessarily irredeemable, so I'm waiting to see what happens before I get upset about it. ;)
| mani12191 chapter 20 . 5/3/2012
I really don't know how your story doesn't get more hits, it's SO good. But oh man, good for Edward calling Bella out like that, even if it was a little harsh. They both definitely have to understand that they're both at fault but maybe now they can slowly start to fix themselves. I'm so glad Bella has Mike. Poor kid :(
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| amysangels2 chapter 20 . 5/3/2012
Loved this chapter! So happy I can review and get notifications now! I would hate to miss a chapter of this story. Can't wait for an update!
| littlelizruth chapter 20 . 5/3/2012
yeah. ouch. so is rose like edward and emmett's new bff? there is a part of me that wonders if high school is really worth it all. i didn't really experience it, i was a loner and kept my head down until i got into college. for me it was worth it. but i wonder for those who live it up just to lose it all in the blink of an eye like rose, well i hated those people so i never caired until one of them died two weeks before graduation. ever since that day, and on the days i see them while i work behind a regester to pay for school, do their long tired faces have any trace that it was worth it?
| kismit1496 chapter 20 . 5/2/2012
augh! I wasn't picturing him telling her that he was done because he found out the truth - oh boy!
| KaliCali77 chapter 20 . 5/2/2012
Great chapter! I love how Mike and Bella Are there for each other. Poor Edward it took so long for him to find out the truth & Bella doesn't know how to handle it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| blackswaninlust chapter 20 . 5/2/2012
Jello Pudding Pops, my fave was vanilla/chocolate swirl. Timberlands! Funny because I work for the Timberland Company. Thanks for bringing me back.
| utahgirl chapter 20 . 5/2/2012
This story kills me every time, first with the happy, now with the angst! (But I love it)Can't wait to see what happens next
| Katiej1477 chapter 20 . 5/2/2012
Oh man. Have they hit rock bottom yet or do they still have a ways to go? And congratulations to your sister!
| jmeec316 chapter 20 . 5/2/2012
Finally! GO EDWARD! I was soooooooooooooo sick of Bella - and all of her friends - placing all the blame on him.