Reviews for Break
Hika Hitachiin chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Hahahaha,O that gets me every time!
animefollower chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
I loved this story! POOR HIKARU *grabs tissue and sobs* he suffered for almost a week with someone as tempting as kaoru by his side. its so...FUUUUUUN!
Officially-Mrs.Trancy chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
I don't even know how many times I've read this. It always ends up with me half-dead on the floor. Me: Oh, Hello Floor... *dies*
EternalFalsity chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
I love your Fanfictiona, can't believe I had not noticed the sequel. Was a great read abd very exciting story haha :)
iMakeMistakes chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
You should make some more of these Kaoru teasing Hikaru fics :D or maybe the other way around for once xD? Either way, I love your character portrayal.
akirak chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
lol i love the twins xD
also whats your fav pairing for OHSHC ?
Kera Hayes chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Even better than the first. I really do love Kaoru being evil. Hikaru being that desperate at the end ... yum!
cyberangel chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
i really like stories with kaoru as an S&M

lol at the ending
AngelGirl0200 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
that was really good. r u going to have a chapter 2 for this?
YouAStupidHoe69 chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
That was really good! I had to go read that earlier story to know what was going on, but I'm happy I did! :P Keep up the amazing work, and keep writing the Kaoru torture porn! 'Cause we love it! XD
nyanyakate chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Princess Of Souls chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
C0mdLicAt3p chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
lol You took all my advice before I even gave it xD

BrokenXFacade chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
I'm going to stop being an evil yaoi porn-reading lurker and just say that though I'm too embarrassed to review, I love your stuff-and not just the yaoi porn-filled kind.

Do you even know how good you are at this? There are a selective few Hitachiincest writers that are the absolute best at writing this stuff, and you are definitely one of them. So many people that write these two so well are gone from fanfiction, but I'm glad you're still here. The way you characterize Hikaru and Kaoru is the absolute best because you don't force them into a very stereotypical uke and seme roles, and you stay true to their devilish nature. Especially Kaoru because he's so...not himself in a lot of fics, and it peeves me off. Sadistic-masochistic!Kaoru is pretty hot and I can't get enough. He's definitely a bad-ass uke, ne?

Haha I like lemony goodness the likes of which Hikaru gets a little tortured. It's fun because his impatience and immaturity makes it all the more fun. Blushing Kaoru at the end made me smile, and this was just all around wonderful.

I'm totally going to author-alert you and anxiously await more Hitachiincestous goodness. X3 I promise from now on to all other new fics I read of yours I will make sure to review. :D Albeit it probably won't always be this long of a review(-though I do tend to ramble).

~Shy Neko-chan
galaxxy3 chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Mmmmm, I love this! I have to say that I love Hikaru as seme best, but I like stories where Kaoru is a badass uke, I think it suits him. You don't get much more badass than putting your lover in a chastity belt to teach them a lesson, lol! So hot and steamy, even a few great humorous moments to boot! The lag fanning was a nice touch, I could picture poor Hikaru sitting there in misery while everyone looked on. Kudos!