Reviews for hero
A Tengu Reporter chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
For a one-shot, this is very-very-very short. It's like you just typed this up with little to no effort at all. Plus, this one-shot lacked elaboration, and it's littered with capitalization errors. You should avoid that.

Sorry, but your one-shot desperately needs to be improved.

Lilli~
SpecialPikachu chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Yay! Another SpecialShiping

I like this oneshot, so cute