Reviews for The Nightmare Field Trip
peacelight24 chapter 1 . 6/7
interesting story, but I have a problem with the entire premise. It just...doesn't make sense for the entire class to be involved in this. Or even Mr. Lancer really. They didn't even give him a choice about it and invaded his mind without even talking to him or confronting the issue with less drastic measures first. What reason could they have for bringing his English class in on it? Mr. Lancer I sort of get, but that's not entirely clear either. Also, where did they get the thing that let him go into his dream? It's an interesting story, and I agree with the progression and characterization of Danny's fears, but there are too many plot holes to really be ignored.
Remember Ember chapter 1 . 2/18
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
BOXLUNCH IS COMING! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Great chapter 1 . 1/17
Interesting, although I think Danny has more fears than those. Looking forward to more!
Totalfangirl01 chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
That...was...beautiful! ;)
Sarah132cs chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
me likey :D
Angelicat2 chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
Cool! I like the comment Guess Box Lunch is next on their list.
guardianofdragonlore chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
Poor boxy ...
Ruby 1334 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
Oh awesome story and idea! :D
I loved the whole idea and HAD to read it!
Very interesting...
I knew that you were going to do 2 and 3 but I never thought about you doing 1...
zoxy2 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
good, although the idea makes no sense, i mean the kid has nightmares so you bring his entire english class, into his nightmares so they have to experience what is going on through his mind/head. but still a good story!
Dragonscorch chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
...That last scene with the Box Ghost... *snickers*
Lokiismylife chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
This was really good!
CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
I love everyone's confusion. It makes me laugh. Great story. Loved it.
Minilopsided chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Liked it! Post more soon!
Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
This was amazing, I adored it!:)
Silver Moon Huntress chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
I feel sorry for Danny...Having to experience those things... Great Story though!
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