|Reviews for Meet The Godparents|
| CaBuckeye chapter 25 . 9/23/2016
Well, good. Albus' "greater good" has always left a lot to be desired for everyone other
that AWPBD. The chance that he would not be reborn is good enough for me to say
'keep going Albus'. We will sadly miss him [not].
| Kai chapter 3 . 9/13/2016
I think that's a lie.
Okay, it's your story and you wrote it that way, but Dumbledore DID know how the Dursleys treated Harry. He didn't have to visit him to find out.
One doesn't plant a spy somewhere without getting their intel from them. Dumbles might not have acted on Snape's intel, but he heard it. And the same has to be assumed for Arabella Figg's information. And Figg knew enough to paint a very bleak picture.
In addition to that, Dumbledore had the Order of the Phoenix keep their eyes on Harry, had them even follow him around Little Whinging. (Dedalus Diggle once greeted Harry in a shop, Harry recognized him in the Leaky Cauldron during his first visit, Diggle lives in Kent which is nowhere near Surrey, magical transport has no "in-between", it's instantaneous from here to there - ergo Harry was followed by Order member Diggle on purpose)
| Docholiday024 chapter 17 . 7/4/2016
Sorry but this is not a H/HR story to me! When I have to read them with other people for half the story, that is just an author trying to gain readers for his story so he mislabels it! As far as Ron and Hermione and a physical relationship goes. When was this suppose to happen? According to what I read and talks on several potterves sights including pottermore they didn't get together till after the final battle! Which is where you said your story begins? So I am at a loss as to when it could of happened! All in all you had a good idea but just blotched it by staying with cannon way to long. I skipped from 8 to 18 cause I couldn't take any more cannon! Then I realized it was to late to salvage the story in my eyes.
| Sema-ger chapter 38 . 5/24/2016
Very interestin story, rather apart the usual. Thanks a lot for sharing it with us!
| V-rcingetorix chapter 13 . 5/23/2016
In regards to the Author's Note in Chapter 12 (probably been a while since you wrote this tale), the joke in the previous chapter's A/N (chpt 11) was pretty vague - it looked as if you were confirming a physical relationship between Ron/Hermione. Remember, as Author, you are the Boss, the CEO, the Man In Charge. Anything you say about your story is absolute Truth ... and you stated that sex occurred before the beginning of this tale.
In response to your later request, here's an idea:
Ron whispers to Hermione that: "He wants whatever she did for Harry while he was out of the tent."
There you go. Less than 2 sentences, can be construed as insulting to Harry, and at least mildly tasteless.
As for the 'suddenness' of a physical relationship ... well, I'm not the best at calculating time duration. However, if they are still long before September (school starts), and the Battle of Hogwarts occurred on May 2, while this story begins on May 11.
If my numbers are right, somehow Ron and Hermione became intimate around a week (11-2 9 days) ... assuming their first kiss on May 2 was the initiation of courting.
I don't think there's any way around it, but from First Kiss to 'shagging' inside 9 days is fast.
Hope that was precise enough.
| Owli chapter 38 . 3/11/2016
I enjoyed this story. I liked how you wrote Harry and Hermione's relationship.
| Lexi-Carter chapter 38 . 1/21/2016
I loved your story there are so many questions left unanswered is there going to be a sequel?
| V-rcingetorix chapter 12 . 1/10/2016
At your request (should it still be valid) here is a Harry-insulting comment that Ron makes, in regards to relationships:
"It didn't take long for Harry to jump you."
"What did Harry do to get in your knickers?"
"Harry's a fast worker."
or my favorite:
"You never let me get past second base. Did Harry potion you?"
I personally think that Ron/Hermione jumping into a physical relationship so quickly is ooc. A matter of weeks is an eyeblink in the mental state of a good chess player, or an intellectual genius. However, this is your story. Write it as you wish, and alter it as you wish. You have my two bits, take them for what they're worth :)
| brightflare chapter 38 . 1/7/2016
Very good story!
| missgsmith51 chapter 31 . 11/12/2015
Agravaine? Well, the name is sort of a combination of two words that perfectly apply to both Lucius and Draco: aggravating and vain! LOL!
Poor Harry! Will he EVER be able to get away from Albus's manipulations and nonsense? Why can't Dumbledore just move on to his next great adventure and leave Harry alone? And why are all of Sybil's prophecies about Harry? Why can't she make someone else's life a living hell for a change? I guess she keeps giving her prophecies to DumDum because he's the only one who listens to her, and then he bends everything to fit what she says in order to FORCE it it come true. Ugh!
I think James and Lily need to rid him of his Harry fixation.
| missgsmith51 chapter 23 . 11/11/2015
IMO, Dumbledore is responsible for that part of Riddle that managed to inhabit Ginny. The manipulative old coot told her parents she was fine and didn't offer or recommend any mind healers at all. For criminy's sake! The kid was possessed by Voldemort for the better part of a year, and she is miraculously fine with no help sorting out what had happened to her? Not really, but in his view her mental health and well-being was "expendable" to his Greater Good. He couldn't allow others to find out what was taking place at Hogwarts, which would have happened if Ginny had seen a healer. Of course, Molly and Arthur should have insisted she was seen by mind healers anyway. I'm surprised that Bill - who obviously knew what happened and certainly knew the dangers of such a possession far better than anyone else - didn't force the issue.
I wonder just how many innocents Dumbledore's actions condemned to death or great loss over the two wars - despite his undoubted protestations that he personally never raised a wand against them.
| Guest chapter 38 . 8/30/2015
Thank you, thank you. This was a fascinating story and your astounding attention to details - especially the creative ones - was incredible.
| Prongs of P.A chapter 38 . 8/29/2015
Please tell me there's a sequel planned!
| emeralgreenlove chapter 18 . 8/21/2015
I like this fanfic, I really do, and I want to finish it because the concept of a baby bringing his parents together fascinates me. However, once you started talking about the elf land and the fact that Harmony is going to know about their connection only once a year? You lost me there. Onto the next chapter now.
| Guest chapter 36 . 7/10/2015