|Reviews for Meet The Godparents|
| Jonuts chapter 21 . 4/8/2013
Whoo! Finally! The story is less tragic and depressing :)
| Jonuts chapter 16 . 4/8/2013
You know, unless they seriously change course with this half-assed plan almost guaranteed to burn the world (Work together with Weasley's by lying and betraying them? Really?), this story is going to be a hell of a tragedy. Best case scenario if they go through with this, is that Ginny and Ron die. If one dies, the other will likely die at the betrayal they'll get. If Harry dies, Hermione will join him. If Hermione dies, Harry will join her. This entire course is insane, unethical, and likely borderline evil. I don't think I could come up with a plot more fiendish to kill these four kids.
If they end up successful, when is Maeve going to show herself and restore Harry's memories? The day before his wedding with Ginny? The honeymoon? After they have a kid? "Oh, I'm sorry Gin. I know you're carrying my child, but I actually love Hermione. We just hid our love so we could use you and your brother with a half-assed Dumbledouche scheme. I expect weekend visitation rights, but me and Hermione are going to be in Tahiti when he's born. Bye!"
Make no mistake, what they're planning is a betrayal. It makes Ron's betrayals look tame by comparison. At least Ron never led Harry on just to tear out his heart. If they're dumb enough to go through with this, they don't deserve their happy ending.
I'll go with Maeve here. You can hardly do breakfast without running afoul of a prophecy somewhere.
| Jonuts chapter 15 . 4/8/2013
This chapter is the sickest, most disturbing thing I have ever read. The calm acceptance of destroying their best friends. Hopefully Maeve talks some sense into these two fucking stupid kids before they do something so monumentally stupid and wrong. They're talking abut marrying other people when they know they're in love, married in all but name, and soul bonded. This is just sick and wrong on so many levels. Whoo! Go Maeve! Bitchslap some sense into the kids!
| Jonuts chapter 12 . 4/8/2013
Judging from your author note this chapter, it seems I'm a year too late in pointing out what you did wrong. At least it sounds like you understand the problem there about not relating the 'when' in a context that makes sense.
On a side note, I'm getting really curious as to whats going to break Harry/Ginny in the next few hours. Hermione and Ron are never more than a breath away from a murder suicide, so that ending spectacularly without forewarning isn't a big deal at all. Harry and Ginny may not be couple of the year, but they get along well enough. Whatever happens has to be pretty drastic to shatter that in a couple hours.
| Jonuts chapter 10 . 4/8/2013
See, the problem with you offering platitudes about how it's going to last not even a week is, the reader has no concept of how much time is going pass on your story. Had you not had the "completed" tag, I wouldn't know if midnight Friday would be chapter 11, or chapter 111. Is it another 10k words, or another 500k words? Is it an entire fic of watching the relationship slowly deteriorate and the last chapter ends with Harry and Hermione sharing a first kiss? Is the story *REALLY* H/Hr, or is the story actually canon pairings with the ending Harmony? Hell, in the end, even with the completed tag, I still don't know if the story itself is going to end thursday.
Thankfully I'm reading the story because I've enjoyed all your stories that I've read so far. So if Harry and Hermione aren't making the two backed beast by chapter two, I just shrug and continue enjoying the story. I mean, come on, my biggest complaint about the story is your author notes! Means you're doing something right. Well, Not to be too picky, but you used hoard instead of horde :p
| Jonuts chapter 7 . 4/8/2013
After reading your author note, I'm about to convert to a canon shipper just so I can convert back to Harmony for cookies. Not just cookies, but pumpkin cookies!
| Eulphy Whitlock-Lupin chapter 13 . 4/2/2013
"Harry James Potter. I, Hermione Jane Granger, do hereby make this solemn vow that I will be your friend and companion as long as we live. Your causes are mine, your friends my friends, your enemies are mine. I swear that I will be there for you whenever you need me, no matter when or where. Ask and I'll come, lead and I'll follow. Regardless of what happens, you're my friend and companion, and we'll face whatever we have to together, now and in the future."
"Hermione Jane Granger. I, Harry James Potter, am your friend and companion. I don't know much about this, but I do know that I will believe in you, care for you, and be your friend for as long as I live. I will be there for you when all others are gone, and I'll know you're there with me without having to look because that's who you are. Now and forever, we're friends and companions."
Awww! Maybe I should use that as my Wedding Vows. Except the names... that'd be awkward.
| Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 9 . 2/25/2013
You let Ron defile Hermione... that is unforgivable, no matter how this story ends, you've placed a blight within this story. No sloppy seconds for my Harry, especially Rons, "Here Harry, you can have it I'm done with it now." Yeeeeah I don't think so.
| LWJ2 chapter 11 . 2/16/2013
Chs 1 - 11:
I'm enjoying this, the pacing is good, you write well. Your premise is much better defined than the usual stories of the HP/HG post HP/GW ones; it allows the reader to see behind the scenes, if you will.
One thing I find inexplicable (or don't understand, pick one) is your note at the beginning of this chapter: Ron and Hermione had sex prior to Ch. 1. Okay. I don't see why it should offend anyone, that behaviour pre-/post-battle is pretty common. Throw together two teenagers who've known each other for six years, neither of whom is really sure they will survive and yeah, they're likely to have sex. I'm assuming (although we know what happens when one assumes) that you've caught flak about it. Ignore the flak-shooters, you're not in a B-29 over France dodging 88mm fire. You've got a decent story here, if someone is offended by it, well, you stated in the precis that it was HP/HG. That's all that is needed. /rant :)
Thanks for writing and sharing this, I'm looking forward to finishing it.
| Azrael38 chapter 18 . 2/16/2013
See, you have chapters like this, where they act all lovey dovey towards each other, but I keep getting this strange feeling that you're going to send them on home after they hang out here and they're going to go back to being just friends. What 18 year old in the world would give up their chance at living the rest of their life with their soul mate? There's no reason for them to believe that they are the only ones that can keep Slytherin from coming back. Why doesn't Hermione come up with some sort of plan to get the Weasleys to understand what's going on? I'd like to read one story where Harry isn't depended upon to sacrifice his personal happiness YET AGAIN so that the entire world is saved. I'd be getting pretty pissed at the powers that be that keep throwing me in these situations if I were him.
Still reserving my opinion on this one. I guess it depends on what happens when they leave here. If they're suddenly all okay with giving up this lifelong love so easily, then it really isn't that strong of a bond and I'll be disappointed.
| Azrael38 chapter 16 . 2/16/2013
You spent the first third of this story explaining how it was going to be a H/Hr story and now you have them all set to pop on back to the real world and basically voluntarily Obliviate the memory of their soul bond. Seems a little cruel and I'm not sure they'd go along with it, considering all the planning and plotting of Dumbledore they just suffered through. Hermione is already on bad terms with the former Headmaster, I can't imagine that she'd be okay with following along with his plan after just remembering that he had done something so heinous to them while they were in school.
| HoosierCullen chapter 38 . 2/13/2013
Very good fic. Though I was pulling my hair out through the beginning, not a Hermione/Ron fan. I loved it once you finally got to the Harmony part, though it was still rocky to read when they first got to the elven world and seemed to be going back to being in the wrong relationships. I hope there is a sequel because you left way too much unresolved to end here. I will look forward to reading more of your work in the future and I really like how you write the Harmony ship. Very Cool.
| HoosierCullen chapter 21 . 2/12/2013
Very cool thank you for not ruining their lives. And I have a guess for the other granddaughter, could it be one Luna Lovegood. I think so...
| HoosierCullen chapter 20 . 2/12/2013
So hopefully this changes the plan the medlling duo have to ruin their lives I would hope a marriage between the two would supercede the fact that they can't be together.
| HoosierCullen chapter 16 . 2/12/2013
So you brought them together just to break them up and send her back with the redheaded garbage disposal and him to the uber-fangirl. WTF.