Reviews for The Perfect Partner
ShanLoveCookiez chapter 5 . 11/19/2014
This is amazing! I really hope that this continues... But I guess there's a really small chance of that after all this time xD but still, I love it. It's a bit hard to think of these characters actually having other emotions, like rage and sexual desire and blahblahblah, but it's also extremely interesting to read!
Well my blabber is over, hehe, hope you post soon!
Candy chapter 5 . 6/25/2012
Gwad! that is alot of thinking there, and it is some time I had been back here! Thank you for continuing a chapter, I think it is alright, .
Ethereal Wishes chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
I've never finished the game with Tony but this really put a new spin on things. I really like your characterization and the new side of Liam really shook me up. I admit I'm writing my own fic about him and he's nothing like he is in your story but it's a great spinoff. Please update soon!
MidnightSakuraBlossom and SYD chapter 5 . 6/5/2012
Yay, another update! Okay, whew, I said that and it's out of my head and into the open (my excitement I've been trying in vain to disguise, haha).

I feel very bad for Ven, she's very shaken and so afraid. And then the whole seduction plan...I hardly doubt she can pull that off but I guess time will tell. Actually, she just doesn't seem like the type of person to pull off being tempting, she looks and sometimes is really innocent and childish. But that said, I like the way you have the character written here.

I think the rating should be changed, however. Now things are turning very suggestive and I don't think it would be much longer before mild sexual acts started to slip in. That, is of course, if you're comfortable with writing stuff like that. If so, maybe it could escalate to that point but not be all-out porn if you know what I mean.

Keep up the good work! I wait eagerly for the next chapter!

Candy chapter 4 . 4/11/2012
Oh oh oh, this new chapter stirs up a new drama, fricken scary but it is fun to see where you lead this one, please continue this story again, :). and I may love to play Liam, I am not angry with you about this one. :).
MidnightSakuraBlossom and SYD chapter 4 . 3/26/2012
Don't worry about it, I understand if getting to writing this took a while. I totally wasn't sitting on the edge of my seat the entire time biting my nails in anticipation. This is not specific denial, I seriously was fine.

But I was interested in the chapter of course. I, for one, kind of like the direction it's taking. For a moment, I thought that everything would be okay. But then I was shifting my eyes in a wave of uncertainty when Liam began to put the moves on Ven. Sure enough, I was disgusted with Liam by the chapter's ending.

Which is strange, because I usually don't mind Liam. Well, I didn't like him when I first started playing through the game but he happened to grow on me. That being said, he still gets on my nerves near 70 percent of the time. When I see characterization like this, I'm tolerate. But...I just don't see Liam as the type of guy to attack like that unless he really is a love freak underneath that smiling nice-guy-like-an-older-brother vibe he gives off. You must ALWAYS carefully look into the nice guys.

But here I am rambling like an idiot! -_- Please excuse me motor mouth. *Clasps a hand over her mouth and awaits the next chapter with anticipation*

Super Robot Malinarlen chapter 3 . 2/19/2012
I love the narrative voice, it draws you in! And zomg, he's about to transform... I think!

I liked the whole angst bit dealing with them brushing up too close while dancing and stirring up feelings. I always suspected as much!
candy chapter 3 . 1/2/2012
oooh my, this is sooo freaken perfect story of the couple. YAY!
MissBayley chapter 3 . 12/26/2011
You. Update. RAWR! I wants moar! Its so good!
Midnyte Wolf chapter 3 . 12/1/2011
In my opinion, when writing a story based within a game's timeline, it's never a good idea to follow the script word for word. It's boring. Plain as that. If I want to reread the same lines and events over again, I'd just replay the game. Writing gives you the freedom to alter the little things to make a bigger impact and NOT result in the very same script of the game.

Similar's fine, but not the same. Just a thought.

But anyway, keep going! I don't want to have to harass you again to get this thing moving.
MidnightSakuraBlossom and SYD chapter 3 . 11/16/2011
You've no idea how awesome this story is so far! I, for one, do not give a damn if you don't follow the exact plot and dialogue of the days to a T. Because this made it way more interesting and totally adorable and emotional as well.

So, I hope you can find the time to continue! I'd love to see more! :) And I understand that you couldn't update for a very long amount of time; I'm the exact same way when it comes to my own stories and it makes me feel like I get nothing accomplished. To be blunt: it sucks when you get nothing accomplished in a day. *Laughs*

Lil Enchantress chapter 2 . 10/7/2011
Interesting so far! I want to read more. :) I'm intrigued to see how you're going to piece this together, assuming you're going with the very ending scene with Tony as your dance partner. To be honest I offhandedly thought to myself while playing Princess Debut near the beginning that it would be funny if Tony was one of the Princes to partner with because he was always so nice to you at practice. Of course I was not serious in the least, but the fact that it has an ending makes me feel all fuzzy inside. It's a cute pairing and I hold it dear to my heart. :)

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Lil Enchantress
Wendy A.S. Cole chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
Another fantastic chapter! I can totally see Tony reacting that way if this situation came to pass, so well done! Hope you update soon~. :D
Wendy A.S. Cole chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Yay! I am so happy that I found this story! Tony was really the best partner for her... Almost all the others were too... ick. They were all jerks in one way or another, and none of them seemed to fit with her very well. :P
MidnightSakuraBlossom and SYD chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
For a first, I have to admit that this is pretty good. You've got nice detail and plot, and I don't think there were any cringe-worthy screw ups.

I hope that you continue, I'd love to see more!
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