|Reviews for Guardian|
| CraZy Blue MonKey chapter 1 . 6/14
I was so excited to read/ listen to this story until I realized you didn’t us the return key twice or tab. Not only does it make my eye roam everywhere but if I’m listening there are no skipping back if I missed something. I’m on the fanfiction app so I can listen while doing stuff.
| graor chapter 1 . 4/19
I genuinely thank you for writing such a good story. You always seem to end up finding works with major grammatical errors nowadays, and I have not noticed much of that in this 400k fic. You also have great pacing, and a great mind for original ideas. The way you blend together universes is exquisite, and I thank you for this work.
| GritimoTheOdd chapter 1 . 3/23
I do know this is unlikely to be read after so long. But in the off chance Black Dragon ever comes back and reads this. Thank you for your writing, I genuinely believe you have a good talent for it. I have found all of your stories fun reads and I hope wherever path your life has taken you since you stopped writing has been a good one.
| Shadowstorm-Vash chapter 8 . 4/10/2021
You have a real problem in this chapter. You keep droning on and on about Russians, Germans and Yakuza. I just can’t be bothered to read so much about third party unnecessary characters. It was bad enough reading about the enemy biotech company but you keep introducing more bad guys before one is even delt with. I want to read about Ranma’s group not theses other boring loser stereotypes. The early chapters are a lot of fun but now it’s too convoluted and I just skip the parts with the new bad guys. Hell, at the start of the chapter you introduce new characters and I just can’t bring forth the effort to care about them. One of the biggest flaws in anime is the need to over explain everything ahead of time and leave no surprises for later. I skipped about 75% of this chapter because you can’t focus on the main characters enough.
| Shadowstorm-Vash chapter 7 . 4/9/2021
Is Junko going to get a personality other than bimbo and whore?
| Derich chapter 20 . 2/13/2018
Sending Snake and Ramna alone on a mission should be considered as damaging than launching a point-blank thermonuclear device... in repetition... for a whole minute.
... And can I have some of the sushi?
| Derich chapter 14 . 2/13/2018
I think you misclassify this fanfic: it should be at least "Insanity/Humor" or "Insanity/Adventure".
Good writing, and I love the casualty count at the end of each chapters :)
| ibraha01 chapter 1 . 2/1/2018
One of my all-time favorites, i really hope you return to writing .
I Did read what you wrote in the author Bio , but we can still have hope .
| ARSLOTHES chapter 29 . 1/13/2018
looking forward to the next chapter whenever you decide to update this fic. I'm pretty sure you can label this as Ranma unintentionally getting a harem again
| Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 29 . 12/5/2017
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/25/2017
Such cliché - evil mastermind type, by all rights, should've been able to be nixed early on but soft-on-girls protagonist has to spare her because of 'honor'.
Bull crap! He should'a blasted her into bone-strewn bloody viscera!
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/14/2017
You know reading those stats at the end I get the impression that the terrorists are winning.
Training CORE personnel can't be cheap and has to take a lot of time.
And those people are dying by the literal dozens.
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/14/2017
I bet you five bucks that there was a lemon in that lasagna.
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/19/2016
Nowadays tanks have bombs on the outside of the armor.
The blast of those bombs greatly lessens the power of a normal rpg round.
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
im not familiar with a lot of the other characters, but the comedy still has potential