|Reviews for On the Island of Death|
| fearlessshadowhunter chapter 1 . 7/22
Amazing grammar which rarely happens now a days it seems pretty good on the lemon part and it had some plot which is nice
| OkamiBloodSnow chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
damn...and damn that was wow
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
| Kuro-Otaku292 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Aaaawwww so cute and slighltly inappropriate considering my age (12) I loved tht if only tht was in the anime, but set like junjo romantico sex scenes whith I doubt will evr happn
| sexy demon neko ciel chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
damn that was hot is all i can say
| candy4beth chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
you should make a sequel
| Thegraybluekitten chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
| Nessie-san chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Extremely well done, even if this wasn't your first yaoi fic. Plus, not only was it a good yaoi, but it had good GRAMMAR! As a grammar nazi, I feel particularly happy whenever a fic has good grammar - Especially if the fic would be pretty good without the perfect grammar - which yours DEFINITELY would have been. Also, I understand about not having a computer and needing smut. I have two computers, but internet only works on one of them, and that one had to go in for repairs, and I was completely yaoi deprived...And I wrote two yaoi fics in one week XD My first ones ever. Not having fan fiction is a wonderful incentive for writing!
| Aaron-TheStarfire-Turk chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
somehow i can imagine that as actually happening, very well written
| YoruNi chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
WOW Great for a first time lemon!
You're lucky! My first and only lemon is HORRIBLE.
| HeroinPhoenix chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
That’s the best alternate ending I’ve ever read! And believe me, that’s saying something.
| HarajukuSora chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
that is how it should of ended!
| Aqua3141 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
First of all: Great story! Second of all:Had they put their close back on when they "disappeared into the shadows of the forest?