Reviews for The Pit
chaotic one1 chapter 1 . 2/7
Major Explicative! I'm so in love with the last two paragraphs. If anyone wonders where your creepiness comes from, I take all the credit! Now that I've stroked my ego, on with the critique... It was an interesting and believable snapshot of Carnegie's childhood. I obviously enjoyed that the end wasn't at all predictable. My only real criticism would boil down to the fact that this story needs to be edited badly. I'm here if you need me.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Like the ending or is that the beginning:)

Fantastic as usual!
XxXVampires-are-awesomeXxX chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
This is really good! I wish there were more Darkside fics out there...the series deserves more attention!
Tape Monkey chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
The only Darkside story, and it's fabulous. I am a lucky girl! I loved little Carnegie. You captured the tone perfectly! Great story.
Ravencroft1972 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
great story well written I loved it .