It feels rushed. Sure, you can get a sense of speed from it, but from the writing to the Sonic's actions, it all seems a little rushed. Maybe a few more details for some agonizing pauses? Or maybe I just read too fast?

Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. :) You know, there are so many unfinished stories on this site that when an epic one like this actually reaches completion, it's reason to celebrate. You did a great job wrapping this one up, giving it a very satisfying end. It's interesting to look back and see how all of the characters have changed, whether a little or a lot, yet Sonic continues to be his old self. In a way, that's the message I got out of this - change. Everybody changes, but... good old hopes and dreams don't.

... yes, well. Terrific job, and I certainly hope to see more writing from you in the future!

Hey, you've finished this long long story? oO Wow, I'm impressed! Respect to you!

I haven't read it yet (well, okay, the first two chapters ) but I'll do it during the next few days. What I've read so far sounds very good. I'm anxious to your story and I'm looking forward to read it. d

A perfect end to a perfect story. Very well done. I look forward to more Sonic fics from you. _

Great Job! I'm gonna read this over again in a few weeks. I gotta say this is tied with two other of the best Sonic stories I have ever seen. I want to say more, but I've said most of it in past reviews. I guess that the fact that my guess was wrong is official now. I will guess something right one of these days!

God bless you.

I am the Eggman!

*sniff* It...It's OVER! NO! *more wailing and crying* And now I'm depressed...

Five minutes later...

Screw it! I can't stay depressed! It just doesn't work for me! AWESOME, AWESOME STORY! I'll read and re-read it until I have it memorized! lol Maybe I won't go that far, but still. It's a good thought! Well intentioned, anyway. Loved this story, absolutely adored it! I'm sorry to see it go! "Gone, but not forggotten!"

If you write another like this, or just another fic period, you can bet I'll be reading it!

Must...put up...EPILOGUE! I swear, I'm sorry to see this one finished. It's brilliant! Sincerely!

Ooh ha ha. That fight was tied with the best fight I've ever seen on Sonic fanfiction, and the fight sequences are one of my favorite things about Sonic fanfiction. Well done. I give this story, although not yet finished, a ten out of ten. Well done!

God bless you.

I am the Eggman!

WOW. Now THAT was a showdown. Very well written. It was a very awesome chapter. And as always I can't wait for the next one. Update soon!

That... was... INTENSE! (grins) And you really had me scared for a couple of seconds there. Sonic's so darn reckless! As usual, this chapter perfectly fit his sort of mentality, with everything rushing by in a constant flow of action. It was really interesting to hear him describe how it's everything around him that moves slowly, not him moving quickly. I guess I don't usually think of it that way, but this chapter made me take another look at it.

It's hard to believe that this fic is almost done. It's been terrific, and I can't wait for the epilogue. You've done a great job, perfect.

AH! The shortness! It burns! lol jk, but seriously, DEATH TO CLIFFHANGARS! *twitch* Awesome chapter though. Can NOT wait until next weekend for the finale! I just can't! Arg!

*sigh* But I know I must...I'll be waiting, impatiently of course, for the end!

Ooh ha ha. Once again another brilliant chapter. I await the rest eagerly.

God bless you.

I am the Eggman!

Phwaa! That's one torturous cliffhanger! I still can't believe that this story's nearly over!

Wow... I can hardly imagine what it would be like to know exactly how time will lay itself out, until I got to a certain point where everything was unknown. That's such a scary idea...

Argh! "Has everything gone horribly wrong"? How can you stand to torture us like that? (laughs) You have me worried now! I can't wait until the final chapter is posted...

GYYAAH! A week is too long to wait ;_; But, hey, it's worth it. I can't WAIT.

OMG wow this story is great i have been following it for years now and if you are wondering reviewing under different names at time sry for the confusion. Wow i hope you update soon this is cool i love the way you mesh your chatatiers thoughts together.