|Reviews for A Modern Pocahontas Tale|
| doodlegirll chapter 9 . 9/22/2012
Honestly, this is so epic. I love it! I love how easy you made this seem, like this was actually the movie itself in modern times. Making John an architect is new, fresh, and exciting!
Everything is lovely, and your English is excellent. I would say I couldn't even tell it isn't your native language!
(I have been meaning to review this FOREVER, but I finally stumbled across it again and reread everything!)
A great read. :)
| Jyoti chapter 16 . 9/13/2012
| Lady with a veil chapter 16 . 8/3/2012
wow... sweettt... they got engaged...
I can feel why Poca let Smith go. It's really proves her power of love & confidence.
| Lady with a veil chapter 15 . 8/3/2012
it's really sad & sweet. But I know why John done it. anyway I'm happy that Rolfe is dead.
| Lady with a veil chapter 14 . 8/3/2012
yay! you r back with a great update.
I don't belive Rolfe. He's meaan & Ratcliffe too.
| Jyoti chapter 15 . 7/27/2012
I wouldn't be worried about this chapter because it's brilliant. I would have reviewed a lot sooner but it takes me a long time to read such long chapters. Anyways, there were kind of a few sentences that I personally felt didn't flow, but it was well written for the most part, and it kept me entertained. It was very intense, and you can really sense the emotion felt in this chapter. I would say that it's an amazing job that you did :)
| Jyoti chapter 14 . 7/20/2012
NOOOOO! Was what I kept saying in my head as I read the first part when Pocahontas went for a drink! Omg this is definitely a twist on things, I just hope things will get better. Oh John Smith, you have to do something. Maybe they will burn the papers! Oooh, that sounds like a good plan ahaha xD. Awesome update! Can't wait for the next one.
Sorry for not reviewing your other stories, like I said before, I've been busy with my own. Great job though!
| blackcatshadowss chapter 14 . 7/19/2012
Hey, that was a huge chapter but really great.
please update soon , I can't wait.
I've noticed that in your stories Rolfe is the bad guy, the evill one, I mean it happens usually whereas in my stories he is not xp
And I also love your Thomas character,he is lovely here.
Also, Disney is not history, but the sequel (which I strongly hate) is not history either.
It's just a crap with some slightly historical facts.
| blackcatshadowss chapter 13 . 7/7/2012
Wow, that was a big one !
Well, this is an amazing story I sat here and read all the chapters, I am exhausted now but it doesn't matter for the story is so good.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
| ladyofwonder chapter 13 . 4/10/2012
That was a really good chapter
I can't wait for more you make it so susupenseful it is awesome
this is a very addicting fanfiction i hope that Pochantas answers.
I can't wait for more :)
| Jyoti chapter 13 . 4/9/2012
Amazing! I love it! Update asap, I wanna know what happens.
| Lady with a veil chapter 13 . 4/9/2012
THIS IS THE BEST POCAHONTAS STORY I EVER READ!
And this one is your best chapter so far. I enjoyed how you pictured rolfe :)
And poor Smith:( I feel for him.
| ladyofwonder chapter 12 . 4/3/2012
Sorry for not reading this story for awhile I have not really been reading fanfictions. I got really busy with school but now I am catching up.
I am glad that you are trying to finish this story becauseit is really good. I can't wait to read more. This story is really intense and I enjoy every minute of it. Thank you for writing such an amazing piece of work.
I can't wait to read more :)
| Lahiwe chapter 12 . 3/20/2012
Hey, I hope I'm not one of your missing readers...what with school and discovering the awesome fandom that is Victor Hugo's The Hunchback of Notre Dame, it is difficult to remember which stories I am regularly reviewing. Anyway, great chapters! ten through twelve were very thrilling and action packed. I feel so bad for Kocoum and Nakoma, not to mention Pocahontas...and your characterization of the infamous Rolfe is really great. Kinda reminds me of that song "things are not always as they appear" in pocahontas 2. I hadn oticed that you pulled chapter twelve earlier, so I'm glad you put it back. And don't get discouraged. Like the previous reviewer said, this is actually quite a few reviews. The more chapters you get, the more reviews!
| Jyoti chapter 12 . 3/19/2012
You have a ton of people reading this! I mean I only get like a couple of reviews. I would kill for 53 reviews. But anyways I really like this chapter. That was definitely a twist on things. Amazing job!