Reviews for Refreshment
stacey caitlin chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
This is so soooooo gooood!
Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
A very nice follow-up to For Better. Thanks. :)
luvgoround chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Good as ever.
dippycippy chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Amanda chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
This story is amazing. Please write many many many more! You have a gift for "M" writing.
gayeffie chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Self consciousness: bad.

Orange-Shipper's smut: .

*heavy sigh*
vyrastra chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Ah, Orange! I love, love, love this. You are the most skillful and tasteful smut writer ever. Please don't ever feel self-conscious about it again. Just continue to produce.

Love the fact that it's in For Better's universe... And the characterization is impressively perfect (for a smut piece, even). Yeah, Mary would, like, so totally be into being dominated... And can I just say-I love that they have real-people sex. :) Hooray!
silverducks chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Well, you've not only crossed the "no smut" line running, BUT you write it so well. There was just so much more going on which was really sweet - their banter, how close they are, Mary waiting up for Matthew in his study - so very sweet. The ending was really sweet too, especially the bit where Mary says she could do with a cuppa now! LOL
Epea Pteroenta chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Aw what a great reward for finishing packing! The smut was really well written but I have to say that it was the banter and the sweetness and the setting and way it linked so well with For Better that made it for me.(They have got rather better, haven't they? :P)
bijou156 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Wow, that was marvelously perfect! The narrative and characterization was excellent! It was amazing how you gave in-depth descriptions of Matthew and Mary "distraction".

QUOTE: "I seem to remember that being the reason we came down, after all! You distracted me, Mary."- hilarious!

Overall, I enjoyed reading this Matthew/Mary smut! :D I hope you'll write some more? Maybe Mary or Matthew can wonder if they get "distracted" too often, that their brood may increase in size (like rabbit families). I hope you don't think I'm being too forward in suggesting that, I mean well and it could be a prompt for your next fanfic? Anyway, I'll be happy with whatever you chose to write about because it is always really enjoyable to read your fluffy-verse and other fanfics! :D
GhostIsland chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
OH. MY. :D That was so, SO hot - but not just hot: it was passionate and intimate and sensual and loving and sweet and a little dirty and just so utterly fantastic. :) The images you evoked so clearly...(her. heels. on. his. shoulders. O.M.G. :D ) to make such an act as "doing it on the kitchen table" into something so much more emotional and...almost reverent (seriously, if that wasn't Matthew worshipping her body, I don't know what was :p ) And ohh, "my beautiful girl..." :faints: This was smut surrounded by and written with love, which is truly the best kind. :) You really do have such a gift for this - please, PLEASE write more soon! :D