Reviews for The Cinder Boy
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 13 . 11/14/2012
best ending line ever
Linaceae chapter 13 . 10/27/2012
Youhouuuuu ! Bravo ! :D
They finally got their happy ending..! :')

Sherloch is such a big perv XD

I really enjoy this story, so I'm just going to read your other fic.

see you !
Linaceae chapter 11 . 10/27/2012
John actually brought a gun for his wedding day ?! O_O
And no one had notice ?!
No wonder ther is lot of trouble after all..! XD

And just... Three gunshots ?
I'm okay for one, but where are the two other ?

I'm looking forward the wedding night ;D
Linaceae chapter 10 . 10/27/2012
You really can't stand an all-sweet-end, isn't it ?
Oh my... It was all going so nice.
And Sherlock was so cute with his 'who said I'm nervous' attitude XD

In fact, I have to confess that I'm pretty pleased that Sherlock finally meet Jim.

I feel there will soon be a big storm... ;)
Linaceae chapter 9 . 10/27/2012
Soooooo CUUUUUUUUTE !
Sherlock finally do it !

Thank you so much Mycroft ! :D
(even if a gun isn't really a clever solution - -')

Phew... I thought I was gonna become crazy... I truly believed Jim was going to do it...

And now, what will be the Queen reaction. Because she was happy for Sherlock, but regardless of her temper, I don't know what to think :S
Linaceae chapter 7 . 10/27/2012
BAM ! Take this, Moriarty's family !
Such a relief ! :P

Love the way Lestrade is flabbergasted by Sherlock actually dancing with someone 'willingly'.
Ha ha :D
Sherlock had to make him hard time ;D

Hope Jim won't understand who's this "mysterious" young man. Or else... Oh my... :S
Linaceae chapter 6 . 10/27/2012
Mycroft's so cool ! /
But... Isn't his hair blond ? Or more like reddish-blond.

I love the "You mean like those little, sparkly, magical, flying things?" XD
John is so ingenuous. :p

Come on ! Go ahead John !
Linaceae chapter 5 . 10/27/2012
Lestrade is just so kind :')
And Andy is just so... argh ! He's such a jerk !

Is this going to turn into "donkey skins"? (don't know the english name)
You know, with incest and all...

Sherlock is desperate. He who cry almost made me cry too ;'(

Please, keep believe in John !
Linaceae chapter 4 . 10/27/2012
Wahou... It's go so quickly !
Suppose John had a big need of regard.

Lady Hudson is just as lovable than her usual self.

Can't wait to see godmother Mycroft ;D
Linaceae chapter 3 . 10/27/2012
Poor Sherlock... I bet he will be disappointed if John don't show off. And unfortunately, it will probably happen.

Cheer up John !
AwsomestPersonAlive chapter 13 . 8/15/2012
Read this not expecting much but was prooven wrong almost immiadeatly i love this story good job
Satan'sPixie chapter 6 . 5/19/2012
LOL! THAT WAS BRILLIANT! I got the giggles at Mycroft being a fairy godfather! Totally unexpected but awesome! Liking the story!
ladystarry chapter 13 . 3/11/2012
(sorry, too lazy to sign in ;)

AWESOME story! I read it all in one night (it's actually around midnight now, how ironic is that?). I think this was a lovely fic, even though there was some grammar issues and slight OOCness. But I loved the whole thing anyway!

BTW, you should probably raise the rating, because of that last chapter...It was an awesome fic, but I didn't expect THAT, and the mods aren't as laid-back as I am. I would hate for this epic story to get deleted.

Now I shall go and read your other fics!
SeverusDmitri18 chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
That was awesome.
loki-god-of-sexiness chapter 2 . 1/6/2012
I still need to read the rest, but I needed to say, nice Hercules reference. It made me laugh. :)
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