|Reviews for Portrait of a Shattered Woman|
| Kahoko chapter 11 . 11/16/2008
Ah please continue this story! It's too good to end just like that...
I know it's been a wile since you update this fic, but please have mercy for a poor french cowboy bebop fan who is utterly in love with your faye story!
Anyway great job
| Tuppence chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
I think this is actually pretty good. I think it's a good interpretation of how Faye may have reacted to Spike's death, but I do think that Jet and Ed would have been more understanding. Maybe you could make their reactions less extreme, and more...just...negligent, which allowed her to distance herself from them, maybe? It's just that it doesn't seem plausible that they would be this non-understanding because they've always seemed to be intuitive.
Aside from that, the spelling and grammar was good for the most part. There was a good mixture of the various types of sentence-formations that kept the writing interesting to read, and prevented it from being monotonous. The descriptions were a little excessive, and very little actually happening but it's probably because this is the prologue.
Anyway, this sets the scene up well, describes the emotional states of the characters well, and though little happens, it does work well as a prologue.
Hope this was constructive. I just thought I'd add that I liked it.
| haunted2insanity chapter 11 . 8/6/2006
I really like this story. Is this the end or is there more to come?
| Lucky Meryl chapter 11 . 1/1/2006
WHY MORE ABSENCE! I didn't even notice that this story was updated...but I will from no on! Now on my story alert list!
| animegurl23a chapter 10 . 9/23/2005
Whoa, what the hell kind of comment did I post for chappy nine...? _
| animegurl23 chapter 9 . 9/18/2005
The bounty on your head nnight disappear...But the guilt (if you have any humanity left in you) will weigh on your shoulders.
| animegurl23 chapter 8 . 9/18/2005
I'm a bit confused as it what exactly is happening here...
| animegurl23 chapter 7 . 9/16/2005
OF COURSE he's Giles! _ Hello...
| animegurl23 chapter 4 . 9/16/2005
I absolutely LOVE fighting-scenes in CB...
Awesome chapter! _
| animegurl23 chapter 3 . 9/16/2005
| animegurl23 chapter 2 . 9/16/2005
:/ She lied to the woman...
| animegurl23 chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
*_* Sorry, I feel a bit hyper.
| Alternative Therapy chapter 11 . 9/7/2005
Whoa! That was a strong chapter! Everything fit together perfectly. The conversation between them was so natural and so vibrant! So edgy! That's the word I was looking for. After a couple of long, tiring days this was a real treat to come across! (falls over backwards in her excitement). The exchange between Spike and Faye was totally classic - my favorite part in this chapter! And I hate that I have to stop reading now! So please please please update as soon as you can!My little Timmy is absolutely dying to hang out with your little Jimmy again! LMAO . . . oh how insane we all become! Till Next Chapter! Take it easy!
| Hayal Nazim chapter 11 . 9/6/2005
Wel, that was a filling chapter, at least Faye gets some help.
| Alternative Therapy chapter 9 . 8/1/2005
You can't do this to me! It's so not fair! You, my oh-so-talented friend, have me completely enthralled in this story, okay actually, in ALL your stories! Now the question remains is why haven't you updated! You have such a great talent, and I absolutely love your style. There are so few good in-character Faye stories out there (and if you haven't noticed I tend to think that Faye is one of the most powerful characters in Cowboy Bebop) and I must say that yours tops them ALL! Now, if you don't update sometime I am going to have to resort to drastic measures. . . Though, I'm not sure what those measures will be quite yet, but I assure you they will be SCARY (winks). So my marvelous author, who has held me entrap in your workings of your pen or keyboard (Which ever one it may be,) I remain utterly spellbound by your writing until you grace me with an new chapter that will (I have no doubt) captivate and delight me once again. So please update ASAP!
And in the end . . . it all comes down to this.