|Reviews for Strong Blood|
| Noble Korhedron chapter 12 . 8/7/2013
So what's going on? Ginnys' worried Ravenclaw will win - or that they'll get a lot of decisions their way on account of what day it is...?
| StrangersLikeMe25 chapter 12 . 8/5/2013
Hey Leah M.W.
I really like your Story, The way you present us with not only the History of the diffrent members of the whole family and how you let it develope to invcude mentions of the current related families/members is absolutly awesome. I really liked how you now connected the told stories/History with currend events and even a case of a dark wizard...so now the time for Harry and his family to discover the various connections seems to come closer - I hope in time to rescue the profeciesed child Vernon Jr.
| Devon Shea chapter 12 . 8/4/2013
Your story is interesting but I am also finding it increasingly more difficult to follow. The spelling and continuity errors are too distracting. Maybe you'd find it easier to manage if you broke each long chapter into a few shorter chapters. Good luck.
| Icis of Avalon chapter 11 . 8/3/2013
I find your story very interesting, although it does get a bit difficult to follow the different time lines on occasion. The bits of wold history make me want to go find out more about those times. Allowing the reader to glimpse just a bit of the family's interaction with Tom Riddle is also captivating, although I would like to see Harry and Dudley's reactions to these revelations. On another note I think I should point out that you need to work on your cut-and-paste, there are several instances throughout your story were a sentence or paragraph are repeated. Otherwise, keep up the good work. I look forward to your next chapter.
| Velasco chapter 11 . 8/3/2013
I love the premise of this story, it's very unique. My one gripe is all the spelling errors and repeated paragraphs. I understand wanting to post a chapter and get it out there but please read your chapters through before posting them. It will go a long way towards improving the flow of the story and keeping readers engaged.
| Prie chapter 11 . 8/3/2013
Thought you uploaded ch 12?
| sparky24 chapter 10 . 5/16/2013
I meant to post this in the next chapter but haven't posted a review in a while and I am not used to the new format. I am enjoying this story it is being told well with some nice insight into minor and forgotten characters. You need to really check your spelling. In Chapter 11, you are constantly changing Violet's name to Violate, which implies a much different thing altogether. Also, the way your story reads, you have Petunia marrying her half-brother, a rather twisted way of having everyone related to one another. Please try to keep the grammer and spelling straight and your story will turn out great.
| sparky24 chapter 11 . 5/16/2013
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| Noble Korhedron chapter 11 . 5/6/2013
ULP! Violet's in twouble... :-P
| DanielHimura chapter 11 . 5/1/2013
I am liking this story very much. I am just finding a little annoying so many family secrets and nobody really knowing anything, or if they do, its only in small parts.
Hope to see more soon.
| gaul1 chapter 11 . 5/1/2013
likes the web you weave, keepu p the good work, byes
| birdy chapter 10 . 2/12/2013
please update soon this is good
| paratrooper321fa chapter 10 . 12/10/2012
I must say I am disliking the massive changes to the story , the time line jumps and the fact that stuff gets cut out and moved aound,
| Twisted Identity chapter 10 . 12/7/2012
I honestly like the premise of the story. It's very unique but it is hard to enjoy the story with the mistakes in it. There are many spelling errors and grammatical mistakes in the story. Also, some parts of the text are repeated twice with no explanation. Another problem is that the construction of the plot and what you are trying to say is very unclear. It would improve IMMENSELY if you edited it or had someone else look at. it would make it a lot more enjoyable. Right now, it is hard to get through the text because of all the spelling mistakes. This has the potential to be good, it just needs some editing.
| southern-reader chapter 7 . 12/7/2012
Well I am done with this story. Not only do the constant
changes in year piss me off, but I want to kill that little
I have never read a story whre I hated a character as nuch
as I do her.