Reviews for Failing, Flailing, and Falling
InvaderPey chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Awww. This is the most adorable fail-sex ever! 3
TheGilbird chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
hehehehehehehehehehehehehehe hehehe... I like it! It's really good! :D
Kasumi Lovegood chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Fail sex is always amusing to read xD I'm glad the night didn't turn out to be a complete failure to them, though :'D And this story shows that they're truly in a good moment for their relationship, as they've developed trust and they're comfortable with each other. Nice story
D-Channerz chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Oh god I think I just melted into a puddle of goo! This was PERFECT. Awkward and beautiful all at once. Really loved the way you wrote both of them here.
Taylor Padfoot chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
That was the most adorkable-awkward story ever and I loved it! I don't know, but it just really seemed to fit them lol

It was fun (and hot) to read. Great job!
yeahnomore chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Hahaha, very, very cute.
Trumpet-Geek chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
This was so freaking cute. Seriously. Everyone always writes these perfect sex scenes, but sex is never absolutely perfect, especially, I would imagine, with America and England.
ThatThemPersonThere chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I love it.

Hot messy sex that doesn't go as planned makes for the best.

I also love your style. Overall, it made a very good story!
obabema chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
I loooooooooooooooove it! XD

The line about France was really funny!

The story was actually really funny... XD
aphfangirl7476 chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
XD that was such a win yet such a fail all at the same time. Brilliantly written. I applaud ur talents.
GilbertOfPrussia chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Words cannot express how much I ADORE this fanfiction~ Not only because it's USUK and VERY well written, but...

Well...because it shows that sex, whether between a man and a woman, a man and a man, or a woman and a woman, is NOT perfect. The media often portrays it that way, as does pornography, yaoi, yuri, hentai, and nearly every M-rated fanfiction ever written.

I love the perfect mixture of love, smut, and awkwardness that you managed to squeeze in here, as well as the wonderful job you did capturing Arthur and Alfred's personalities and relationship. 3 The Prime Minister didn't call it 'special' for nothing~

This is just...most definetly the best fanfiction I've read in quite some time. As nothing else will suffice, how about a huge, not-at-all-awkward 'ILU' from this humble, bisexual reader?
ArthurIsAwesome chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
I think I was reading this far too early in the morning to appreciate the humor in this story. I had just read it, all tired and expressionless, but when I read the last paragraph I just broke out in this huge doofus grin. I thought it was so sweet, really. The whole story is very good. Two thumbs up!
CrimsonKitsuneShinobi chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
This was one of the cutest, sweetest, funniest stories I have ever read. I love how no matter what crazy thing happened, it didn't get awkward, they just laughed it off. xD
Eviltwin05 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
You had me laughing the whole time! XD For some reason, I usually don't like England topping (no idea why, just do) but you had made it seem so funny and entertaining that I enjoyed every second of it. Great job!
CaptainCynical chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
That was so good. The sex was really realistic and I like that you've set it in the 80s. It's nice to read Alfred gushing over Arthur. Also, I liked the little bits about Arthur being very happy and saying all those romantic things. Such a lovely fic to read :)
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