|Reviews for My One Dark Fire|
| FlameFrost101 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Love it soooooo much! Zanna is my fave character, and this is just like her!
| sma erDnIy lnO chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
wow hankat ive never read the series but know i wanna you did great girl!
~Pegasus aka Lex ;)
| Dragonfly999 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Nice. I like it very much. Whether it was intentional or not, I like the way Zanna's third-person reflection upon David breaks sometimes and she ends up talking as if directly to him. You wrote this well, I think. The fic blends with the underlying song - the words mould with each other and it works nicely. The sentence after "That I want it this way" is a little bit too long (in my opinion, which probably isn't that great...) but the only thing I would leave out about it would be the "one of the nine" and "the cast out Fain's shell", or maybe cut all the descriptions up into a few different sentences. Other than that, I have no somewhat negative comments - this songfic is superb and written with passion. B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L
| Sky- XD chapter 1 . 7/23/2011