Reviews for On a Cross and Arrow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, this story is absolutely wonderful! I've laughed out loud and "ooh"ed and "aah"ed at least a dozen times while reading it. And now I simply can't wait to read the next chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD BEST. MLP. STORY. EVAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR. WHY AM I TALKING LIKE THIS! BECAUSE CAPS GET YOUR ATTENTION! Anyway, epic story. The plot is just so... well, good doesn't even scratch the surface of it. That, combined with the vivid combination of character personalities shown in MLP...epic, just epic. I am a 15-year-old baketball jock, and I think this is epic. Kudos to you, fine sir, for making my day. Sooooooooooo... when the next chapter coming up? |
![]() ![]() Okay, loving the story so far! Leave it to Rarity to fall in love with herself. Can't wait for the next update I totally love Pinkie Pie so I bet her and her male self will throw a rocking party! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... mai... gawd... THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVAR! It's so cute... particularly Flutteryshy and Butterscotch _ I can't wait to read the rest. It's so good, and well written! And then I find the meme references (USE ALL THE MEMES!), and it just gets better! Keep it rolling! MOAR! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :DDDDD I love this. I love you. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. There aren't enough stories with your kind of humor, or these kinds of situations. You deserve more attention for this amazing piece of work. I can't wait. :DDDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() (oh look I have an acount xD) OHGAWD. Pinkie PieHer male selfHappy SongWorld is destroyed. RUN! xD Oh, add in Neji from Naruto to make it 50% more insane. xD RUN! What have you done? (Before I say this, SORRY GOD D) Scripture says that doomsday will come when Pinkie Pie meets her male self... HOLY MACARONI. Well anyways, nice one :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear god, Pinkie Pie meeting her other self...This cause the world to halt and a wild party starts! I can't wait to read the next chapter! This story getting really interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh ho. It's about time. I look forward to seeing whether spacetime can withstand that much bubblegum-flavored reality bending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I simply haven't ever found a story that makes me ache to read another chapter as much as your story has. If you don't update this story soon I will surely explode...twice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is going to be a swell party~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, Twilight. Just talk to Dusk. Nothing bad will happen. Oh, and more Fluttershy/Butterscotch and Rarity/Elusive moments, please. Wait! Pinkie Pie is going to meet her male self...THE WORLD IS DOOMED. Run, before the fourth wall is utterly destroyed. What have you done. I love the story so far. I hope you update soon. Sincerely, Evo |
![]() ![]() ![]() And the plot deepens... This is still very, very delightful to read, even though the sappiness of having two Raritys in the same room is rather unbearable. And I still laugh at this, even though I'm not certain if I'm supposed to or not. I just find this story peculiarly funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yet another awesome chapter! I'm loving this! I sure hope Rarity and Elusive can be together. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just want to let you know I'm really enjoying this. Easily one of my favorite stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh. I think we all forgot about Pinkie... |