Reviews for On a Cross and Arrow
Emmalyn chapter 6 . 8/8/2011
Haha, this story is absolutely wonderful! I've laughed out loud and "ooh"ed and "aah"ed at least a dozen times while reading it. And now I simply can't wait to read the next chapter! :D
SCI-FIWIZARDMAN chapter 6 . 8/8/2011



Anyway, epic story. The plot is just so... well, good doesn't even scratch the surface of it. That, combined with the vivid combination of character personalities shown in MLP...epic, just epic. I am a 15-year-old baketball jock, and I think this is epic. Kudos to you, fine sir, for making my day.

Sooooooooooo... when the next chapter coming up?
Nothing-personal atl chapter 6 . 8/8/2011
Okay, loving the story so far! Leave it to Rarity to fall in love with herself. Can't wait for the next update I totally love Pinkie Pie so I bet her and her male self will throw a rocking party!
bungiejumper117 chapter 6 . 8/8/2011
Oh... mai... gawd... THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVAR! It's so cute... particularly Flutteryshy and Butterscotch _ I can't wait to read the rest. It's so good, and well written! And then I find the meme references (USE ALL THE MEMES!), and it just gets better!

Keep it rolling! MOAR!
Mister Unsmiley chapter 6 . 8/7/2011
:DDDDD I love this. I love you. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. There aren't enough stories with your kind of humor, or these kinds of situations. You deserve more attention for this amazing piece of work. I can't wait. :DDDD
Luraila chapter 6 . 8/7/2011
(oh look I have an acount xD)

OHGAWD. Pinkie PieHer male selfHappy SongWorld is destroyed. RUN! xD Oh, add in Neji from Naruto to make it 50% more insane. xD RUN! What have you done? (Before I say this, SORRY GOD D) Scripture says that doomsday will come when Pinkie Pie meets her male self... HOLY MACARONI. Well anyways, nice one :D
Aoriki Matsumaru chapter 6 . 8/6/2011
Oh dear god, Pinkie Pie meeting her other self...This cause the world to halt and a wild party starts!

I can't wait to read the next chapter! This story getting really interesting!
Overactive Mind chapter 6 . 8/6/2011
Oh ho. It's about time. I look forward to seeing whether spacetime can withstand that much bubblegum-flavored reality bending.
TheGreatPyro chapter 6 . 8/5/2011
I simply haven't ever found a story that makes me ache to read another chapter as much as your story has. If you don't update this story soon I will surely explode...twice.
Dr.Dude chapter 6 . 8/5/2011
Oh this is going to be a swell party~
Evowizard25 chapter 6 . 8/5/2011
Oh, Twilight. Just talk to Dusk. Nothing bad will happen. Oh, and more Fluttershy/Butterscotch and Rarity/Elusive moments, please.

Wait! Pinkie Pie is going to meet her male self...THE WORLD IS DOOMED. Run, before the fourth wall is utterly destroyed. What have you done.

I love the story so far. I hope you update soon.


JV-Tosshin chapter 6 . 8/5/2011
And the plot deepens...

This is still very, very delightful to read, even though the sappiness of having two Raritys in the same room is rather unbearable.

And I still laugh at this, even though I'm not certain if I'm supposed to or not. I just find this story peculiarly funny.
Fan Boy 101 chapter 6 . 8/5/2011
Yet another awesome chapter! I'm loving this! I sure hope Rarity and Elusive can be together. Update soon.
HayesAJones chapter 6 . 8/4/2011
Just want to let you know I'm really enjoying this. Easily one of my favorite stories.
iPinkNinja chapter 6 . 8/4/2011
Uh oh. I think we all forgot about Pinkie...
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