Reviews for On a Cross and Arrow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've been following this story on Equestria Daily since the begining. So glad to finally see it on this site. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOOOHHH! This is just too good! I love this story! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, yes, maybe you can ship Elusive and Rarity. It would make sense as well, since they are just so uptight, while Fluttershy and Butterscotch are so shy. HOwever, Applejack and the others shouldn't be shipped together. So, I hope you do these two pairs, and that they work out a way to stay together. I would love that, if not, then I might say this whole thing was a waste of time. I hope you update soon. I'm on the edge of my seat. Sincerely, Evo |
![]() ![]() AWESOME. I liked the Rarity x Elusive part, made me laugh like a maniac. Was I the first one to finish reading Chapter 5? Ohgawd. MUST SEE NEXT CHAPTER. |
![]() ![]() Narcisism thy name is Rarity/Elusive. On the one hand it's kinda sweet, on the other hand it's completely wrecked Twi's plans for leaving without causing anymore problems. Nicely done. |
![]() ![]() Can't wait for next chapter x3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant story. Though, I'm not into gender swapping, but since this is a different universe, I'll let it slide. Now, I hope Butterscotch and Fluttershy get together. There are perfect for each other (No pun intended.) Please do it, though don't try to match all the others up with their counterparts. That would be stupid. I hope you update soon. Sincerely, Evo |
![]() ![]() Cool story. A little strange reading it without the image at the begining like the EQ link but a very interesting read none the less. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It makes sense that they would connect with themselves. Now for the elusive Elusive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() enjoyed this story so far. Hope to read more later. |
![]() ![]() I simply love this and I'm looking forward to more chapters very soon pleace I'll get pinkiepie to plead if I must |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh. This can't end well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was reading this on Equestria Daily before it came over here- Loving the premise and the story so far, and I really loved the Dude!Cutie Mark Crusaders. Their interactions with their "sisters" was well written and had me thinking, "Well, I would like my brother better as my sister, I think. I can see how uncomfortable they'd be, though." 3 Diggin' it. ;D Hoping for a fifth chapter soon, yeah? |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE! Can't wait for more! :) |