Reviews for better then me
suzybishops chapter 1 . 7/24/2011

you have super powers.

This was amazing.

Writing was brilliant!

It kind of, sort of goes with my story. But at the same time it doesn't.

-nikolette, xoxo

lightning veins chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
i loooooved this; at first i thought it was a beginning to some sci-fi fantasy multichapter, but then i saw that it was a complete oneshot. it was still good - it was really interesting and made me want to know more about both of the characters. i think it would be amazing if you turned this into a multichapter story :) winkwinknudgenudge.