|Reviews for For Your Eyes Only|
| Casey Hope chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Freaking Awesome ! .
| DcOliver FanFiction chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
Loved this, Thank you.
| Seora chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
What a brilliant balance of humour, intrigue and hot times! You painted a beautiful picture, felt like I was there. Great stuff, thank you
| RaeTakesTheWorld chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Ugh! Why is this completed!? I would love for more from thus story. You're an amazing writer, and have created quite the piece! I'm pleased with what I got, but will always hope for more!
| Lokitaka95 chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
I think you can't have a minimum idea of how much I liked this story! And I think that, as I don't really like nerdy boys (well, I actually haven't found any that is good looking and has a normal self steem), I think I'm going to start giving tutor classes :D I am some kind of nerd girl and I really like the type of guy that are like "the bad boys" so... :P Well, I really liked your writing, it was easy to read, understandable and funny! Maybe I'll send you a PM someday to ask you if I can translate your story to Spanish :D
| Naomi M chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
it's really gd
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
This story rocks
| twifam1 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
I really liked this story and could see it going on! I think you should definatly think about expanding it. I decided to read ur other stories while waiting an update on lost soul...my very favorite! Is it awful being in demand? Lol Im all out of suff to read now.
| superanbl chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
love it love it, i'm a nerdygirl, just the other side of the coin, I used to go out with my little sister (always against my will, but our parents decided that we should go out together or not at all) i looooove maths and physics and i can stay all night long talking about things that nobody wants to talk about, that's me!
when i'm reading the World stops and there's nothing better in earth than finally solving a problem.
i love this Edward is so perfect for me, tanks, the story made me laughs, it's so true sometimes! parties are hell in earth for me! i gonna read your others stories here, by
| ffictionreader01 chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
This was great. I hope you consider writing their date.
| k1942 chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Smart and sexy can definitely be a great combination! This was a really cute story and I very much enjoyed it!
| auror.dep chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
I am huge fan of WannaBeAHardcoreNerdward Contest.
Dear author, dear TheWhitePen, your review finally caught my eye. I want to congratulate you, you god Silver Medal. Rich.
I know, I'll definitely enjoy your winner story. & if I could add my opinion - YES, Internet is guilty for less sex in our lives. & stupid globalization (but it's stupid due to lack of sex at the moment. Other times it's great but at the moment I'm anti-globalist).
'reading computer manuals without the hardware is as frustrating as reading sex manuals without the software' - I'll write it on my restroom doors. Absolutely brilliantly put phrase.
*after ~1000 words*
I'm in heaven. This O/S is so lovely but I have to leave. Description of porn-NaughtyGirl creats such interesting vibe around both of internet-lovers.
Luckily sometimes hot-inept-nerds have great socially active friends who prefers flesh&blood. Moreover their purpose could be to get you laid.
Those inner thoughts... Yes, they are good. And definitely one is always more than nothing (sex measurment).
'under the water, like a mermaid, sucking me off' - Wow!
'Yes, Newton naked while setting up a chemistry experiment' - I'll laugh until tomorrow.
& finally, stupid-obnoxious boys get called gays. 'You're gay' - is it possible to make it better? :D
'He might be gay but I am definitely not. I'm just doomed' - tweeting worth material.
'Just kissing her like this is better than my most dirty fantasy' - if there is some sex-god, I definitely agree.
Of course, that's why it called (fan)Fiction. In order to that from-the-looks-gay-but-apparently-straight get laid. HEA.
All in all I want movie resembling to your witty funny story not that brooding-long-long-long-too-long Breaking Dawn: Part 1. There was just half a minute of joy and everything else just long-drawn money-collecting BS.
Thanks, it was fun to read and tweet and read and write review. Maybe I should apologize for copy-paste review. But your words is your power. Thank you for great time.
| sillyvamp chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
| savannavansmutsmut chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
freaking awesome! I just loved it. IT was so hot and sweet at the same time. I would love for you to continue it until he at least loses his virginity.
| Britt01 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Yeah, some things sound much better in print than real life, eh? Nice story, fun to read, and your Edward is very cute!