Reviews for 01 A Degeneration in Mass
Volossya chapter 49 . 6/26/2023
This was an excellent irl person jumps into Mass Effect fic! Abby was handled well - unique enough to be plot relevant but not overpowered with her knowledge. I know the fic was written before ME3 came out, but still, by using a character with no knowledge of what’s coming you avoided a lot of pitfalls of this idea. Abby’s illness was a novel and interesting addition, and played well off Acura and Samara. It’s always great to see Ardat Yakshi investigated in fic. Kudos!
kannakamui35 chapter 19 . 6/13/2021
ive put off reading this for years, because I was working on a mass effect story heavily focused on huntingtons disease as well (what are the odds, right?) and I was scared of subconsciously plagiarizing any ideas.

i don't think I'll ever get to finish my story, so I finally got around to reading this. im really enjoying it. looking forward to getting through everything you've created here.
SuzysArt chapter 16 . 12/18/2020
I laughed so hard on this chapter (ch16) my sister stared at me halfway through eating her breakfast. Mites. Oh my gawd! Ahahaha! XDDDDD I've been dying to read some good well-written books but couldn't bring myself to read the Wheel of Time. Which I have most paperbacks of but never read. Then I started playing Mass Effect 1 and FINALLY finished the game. (I know its been out forever but I've never been able to finish it till now) Anyway. Thank you for writing this. I've been starved for good reading and this hit the spot by complete surprise. I love Abby as a character, especially after this chapter. I can relate a bit to her and I love that even though this is an OC she is the furthest from perfect without being overdone or dislikeable. She's human on a deep level. And humorous. I've already finished the first two books now and I'm rereading the first fic because I don't want spoilers for ME3 by reading your newest installment yet. (I'm almost done with ME2 now) This is a tasty meal for my hungry imagination. Thank you for writing it!
evattude chapter 49 . 10/26/2020
Great story!
nattysuits chapter 8 . 7/16/2020
Okay, I wish I had popcorn. So many little pieces of this mystery are floating around but still to hazy for me to see how any of them might fit.

Samara doing her Justicar thing is bliss.
nattysuits chapter 7 . 7/16/2020
Morning. Is. The. Man.
Loved the entire scene with the vases. Really entertaining.
nattysuits chapter 5 . 7/16/2020
Things I liked:
Asura (she's interesting, has a life of her own and doesn't sound like a poorly thought out plot device).
Miranda (I don't think I've ever read about her in this period of time or at this point in her character arc).
Fedora is a convincing, very capable asshole with a life of her own and the existence of the first person on this list of things I liked is very intriguing to me.
nattysuits chapter 4 . 7/16/2020
So far this story has been trotting at a steady, easy to follow pace that is neither boring nor breakneck. I'm enjoying the pacing, very natural.
So now You add mystery to this whole thing and now I have another reason to care about your OC. I warmed up to her quick enough but I was wondering why the hell did she exist and now I do.

I cannot resist a mystery. I also delight in seeing how other writers expand on the lore, especially regarding asari.
nattysuits chapter 3 . 7/16/2020
I've read very few stories involving Samara in any sort of starring role so I'm onboard.
nattysuits chapter 2 . 7/16/2020
I am a sucker for asari and any and all exploration of mind melding which I think was woefully underutilized during all 3 games.

I swear despite myself and my reticence to reading stories with OCs, I blazed through this chapter.
nattysuits chapter 1 . 7/16/2020
I was on chapter 6 by the point I said, "You have to leave some reviews you insatiable reader or you'll burn in hell."

So, I've got to admit the summary of this story intrigued me. When you opened with an OC I was less inclined to read, I haven't had good experiences with OCs. To be clear, it's not that I wanted to keep reading, it's that I couldn't stop. I think it's a compliment though it started like the opposite.
jmeson75 chapter 49 . 4/30/2020
Truly a great story. So much raw emotion could be felt. Thank you...this story will be one I do come back to read again.
Guest chapter 49 . 8/16/2018
THANK you
The Ultimate Witch chapter 26 . 4/22/2017
Shepard is kinda a hypocrite huh seeing as she manipulates jack but gets mad at Liara for supposedly doing it to her so weird. Doubt she's gonna get called on it though.
JimmyHall24 chapter 11 . 12/1/2016
Samara is a monster.
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