Reviews for Promises of Paradise
mindluver chapter 5 . 8/2
Poor Spencer. Great job.
mindluver chapter 4 . 8/2
The plot thickens... Great job.
mindluver chapter 2 . 8/2
I'm not sure how, but you made the whole MPREG thing plausible. Great job.
mindluver chapter 1 . 8/2
Poor Morgan! Great start.
StoryTimez chapter 20 . 6/10
I loved this. Honestly, I almost wish Spencer was a little older so Derek would be more okay with liking him...but it's amazing the way it is. I hope you write a sequel! (Not sure if you have, I haven't checked yet).
Sweetmd24 chapter 20 . 5/26
such a great story!
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 19 . 3/19
Very nice twist on the super soldier angle. And I think you did a great job with everyone's personalities, especially Morgan's and Garcia's. I hope there's a sequel where we get to find out what happens to them.
liliace chapter 20 . 1/20
This fic is absolutely amazing! I love the plot and the fact that it's mostly told from Morgan's point of view. Just one little thing bugs me: it would probably be more appropriate to refer to Morgan as 'Derek' when the story is in his POV, as I think it'd make more sense for the guy to refer to himself by his first name. Other than that, I think this was truly brilliant (I also really appreciate the fact that you didn't make Reid and Morgan get together yet, as that would have made it highly disturbing. But I also resent the fact that I didn't get to see them together, if that makes any sense... xD Any chance of a sequel? *puppy dog eyes*)
Graysonation chapter 20 . 7/17/2014
Angst, angst, sweet delicious angst . . . I knew I could count on you.
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Not gonna lie, I'm a bit pissed about the fact that reading a different fic called "Butterfly Fly Away" has given me this weird craving for m-preg (damn it, all!) but, of course, your stories have come through for me on this regard.
What can I say? The action was good, the imagery beautiful . . . I was in tears from the beginning; you always paint the picture of trauma so well, all whilst keeping the heroes heroic and the lines clear in who the bad guy is supposed to be. You write 3eloquently, coherently, and strongly . . . Gawd, this was just wonderful. Enticing, tragic, romantic, little bit sexy, funny here and there . . . Ooh . . . I loved it. LOVE.
In short? I loved it. Cannot believe I waited so long to mosey into this genre. It's fantastic!
edu1e6 chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
I loved this story and I was wondering if you had any plans for the sequel?
Beautifully written
ioname2you chapter 20 . 6/29/2014
WOW... what a amazing heartwarming and touching story, I loved it! I wasn't sure at first with Spencer being so young but once i started i was hooked and couldn't stop til i got to the end, then i was like Noooooo. it can't end there, will there see each other often or just stay in touch by email? if so how many years til they meet face to face? will they both still feel the strong attraction or over time will it lesson or grow in to love? I noticed this was written a few years ago so hopefully my many questions will have answers soon when i find part 2 in a minute. Thank you for a wonderful read and i hope to read more of your amazing CM stories in the future :)
Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
I read this ages ago and loved it. I kept hoping they would meet again when Spencer was older. They seem to belong together despite the age difference.
sweetandspice chapter 20 . 4/22/2014
Loved it.
Sebby-chan3000 chapter 20 . 11/21/2013 there a sequel
IntoTheWilds chapter 20 . 11/14/2013
*Tearing up* Not gonna cry *Clutching my Spencer plushie* Seriously, not. gonna. cry! O.O *annnnnnnnnnnnnnnd damn hormones win.*
Oh MY GOD I'm gonna cry, yup, there we are, in the process of sobbing my wee Irish heart out! And not a tissue in sight, ain't that just typical?!
A few points, 1) Muellar and William Reid are on my list (I have a list yes, doesn't every crazy sonofa-I-I mean wriiiiiter have one? O.o)
2) Spencer makes an adorable 15 year old teen, he's been through hell and good Lord age has nothing to do with parenting! William Reid reminded me sooooo much of my bitch stepmother in that aspect. (I had my son at 19 and she tried to have him taken so she could adopt him. Ironic considering she's abusive alcoholic!) Anywho, never mind Morgan, me, William, room, two minutes. He'd be lucky to walk again!
3) I bow before you Garcia, you are the scrummy tech Goddess we all love and adore who kicks cyber butt and shows being female is a damn empowering thing! No offence to the men of course ;)
4) Bahahaha! Loved how Diana swanned in and oh hell she didn't knock William off his Pedestal, she scrambled up and in steel toe cap boots landed him so far off it he ended up in the next state! It was BRILLIANT! Ingenious and so in need of happening I did a delighted jig in my seat.
5) Godparents? Can I get an AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! That was so freaking CUTE!
And lastly I give you a bloody 15 out 10 because honey-bee that was such a heartwarming, soul touching story that for just one moment I could see that final happy smile on Spencer's face when he realised he had Sophie could survive it all. A victim can choose to stay a victim, but it takes real strength to be a survivor. Well done baby girl and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. :)

Emza xxx
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