|Reviews for Average|
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/3
oh I wish this would be continued! I love this fic 3
| whiskedaway chapter 9 . 12/28/2013
So f-ing hilarious, oh my god.
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 9 . 9/7/2013
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 8 . 9/7/2013
TenTen followed canon I suppose.
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 7 . 9/7/2013
Orochi in drag...
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 6 . 9/7/2013
The end is adorable.
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 5 . 9/7/2013
I AM TERRIFIED!
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 4 . 9/7/2013
Shika is so SLY!
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
I'm half scarred.
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
Shika better be grateful.
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
The ending is hilarious.
| cargas chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
I had read this before... a long time ago. As I reread it now, A got a sense that telling me "NOOO! such a waste!"
Read this review and update it soon yer slacker
| Kirasel chapter 9 . 6/2/2013
I love this - it's so cute! And I loved the last line there. Even here he forfeits...
| A fairyninjapirate chapter 9 . 5/26/2013
Is this story finished or will you update some more chapters I hope you do because it is AWESOME
| The Pirate on Wheels chapter 9 . 4/3/2013
Truly and excellent battle scene. Your comedy continues to be excellent, and I still can't get enough of the relationship. My favorite part is how even though they're stronger, and gain abilities for the sake of making the story more fun (fire element, raiton flow) they only learn to a believable extent, and for purposes beyond "it would be cool to see them stronger," or, "It would be funny." Which is even more fantastic considering this is a humor and romance fic, and not even a action story. Though, you write better action than most action/adventure stories I've found.