|Reviews for The Right Path|
| teamjacob0729 chapter 43 . 1/4
Ahhh. No Emily!
| teamjacob0729 chapter 29 . 1/4
That's hilarious with quil and Jacob. Vampire leaves lol...
| teamjacob0729 chapter 21 . 1/4
Charlie can arrest me, I need the rest. Rofl. That was funny.
Fate, not faith, btw.
| teamjacob0729 chapter 17 . 1/3
Ok. A few thoughts here. First of all, wouldn't Bella and Jacob be related? If she's related to quil and quil and Jacob are cousins...they're cousins. Ick.
Also, I keep seeing one and other. I believe you mean one another.
The pacing feels a tad slow, but it's an interesting spin on the original storyline. Not keeping the wolves away from everyone probably would've changed a lot of things.
Now on to find out whose Bella's lifelong guardian was...thought it was Old Quil.
| Guest chapter 44 . 10/16/2013
I LOVE IT
| SkyBlueBri chapter 2 . 9/24/2013
God. I wish my first date went like this. And it wasn't even a REAL date. Hmm, what does this say about the man I chose? LOL
| Kozette92 chapter 18 . 8/13/2013
I knew it as soon as they started talking about the protector! thats why jacob's wolf never had a problem with paul's! Yup Best story ever!
| Kozette92 chapter 17 . 8/13/2013
I can't read anymore with out telling you what a fantastic writer you are! I hope you're working on your own book because you have talent! I've read many of jacob and bella fic but this one top them all by... a lot!
| PastOneonta chapter 15 . 7/15/2013
Alpha female is going to actually mean something!
| PastOneonta chapter 14 . 7/15/2013
I am in tears too. Sarah Black was an awesome mom. Jacob is awesome, and now he has Bella.
| PastOneonta chapter 13 . 7/15/2013
The idea of a young wolf Jake protecting young Bella is so sweet, I can just see it. Billy and Harry as wolves and Protectors is unique, I am glad too that Harry is in your story, he was a good friend. And a gift from Sarah to Bella, precious.
| PastOneonta chapter 12 . 7/15/2013
Fantastic! Bella's conversation with Jake before the bonfire was really helpful to him to understand his wolf. I loved the aspect of him looking at things like his wolf and then as a human. Charlie was perfect! He had figured it out but didn't have to talk about it or act on it, the legends were something he understood and accepted. And he really accepted - he's letting Bella move in with Jake! Wow! Because Jake and Bella remind him of Billy and Sarah? Still wow!
| PastOneonta chapter 11 . 7/15/2013
This wolf status went very smoothly for Jake and Bella. Jake doesn't even seem angry. What is going on with Embry?
| PastOneonta chapter 10 . 7/15/2013
A vampire threatening Bella has triggered Jake's transformation. He's a wolf and she knows it. He better kill the vamp!
| PastOneonta chapter 8 . 7/15/2013
Jake is thinking of Bella as "mine, mine, mine". That must be his wolf too. Bella is way ahead of him in seeing the depth of their relationship and hearing pain in a wolf's howl.
So Jared and Paul and Sam killed a vamp while Jake and Bella picnicked. Jake still doesn't know. The bonfire is to celebrate.