Reviews for Candyfloss and Motion Sickness
luna.popeye chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
loooooooooove it
CastleAddiction chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
That was really good, especially for a first story, and I liked the ending best haha. :D

Zeferus chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
very, very cute.

as mentioned, there are a couple of mistakes in a few words here and there but nothing to really throw off the story. i really liked it. (:
thisisforyou chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
I appreciate your position and HATE it when people don't review.


There were a few typos and stuff but overall a good first story. I can so imagine Sherlock with motion sickness, it's an oddly vulnerable condition he'd be eager to hide...

Cute idea, well executed. Good job.

-for you!
Sidney Sussex chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Really glad to see you've started publishing! Good stuff for your first shot - Sherlock's total incomprehension of the idea of having (gasp) fun! at an amusement park is wonderful. I've said it before, but the E120 line is definitely my favourite. Do give us some more!
Eat Them chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
heh. Always glad t read cute fluff! Nice ending innuendo.