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| A Bittersweet Liar chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
| arlovskaia chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
You break my heart with this piece. It is vair sad and depressing, in a sick but good sort of way. Your writing, short and fragmented lines, it adds to the theme.
It is good to see it as a non-cliche, without it ending with Beck and Jade shagging in the sunset.
As I mentioned before, depressing but a magnificent fic. :)
| theghostqueen chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
I am fond of this piece. I like the theme of it. I cannot begin to tell you how much I adore your style; it's so unique and just great. This story has an element of anguish, obvisouly, that I enjoyed. This is how I imagine it would happen: Jade and Beck would eventually break up and he would go to Tori. That's how it usually happens in my stories and in my head. Anyway, another phenomenal piece! Awesome job! :) Steph
| seemslikeaporno chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
I actually really like this. A lot. Especially how the divorce was the first part and their marriage was the last line. Also how simple you made it - as you say, Beck and Jade are overtly predictable, and that really shows here. It's lovely and tragic and it kind of breaks my heart, because even if I don't like the pairing, it's always hard to watch two people fall out of love.
But as usual, your writing is beautiful and simple and poetic, and i really like how disjointed it is because that's what their relationship is: disjointed. Apart. I don't know if that was your intention, but I think it's lovely.
| Ashboo211 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
I knew they would eventually divorce. (YAY!)
Yes, Beck and Tori get together.