Team Natsu is on the island. Hee~

What to say anymore, I like the expression while reading this chapter since it is all about Lucy. You are so kind giving a longer chapter to read. Hehe

until next time

It's not even Wednesday yet!

Yay! I reviewed!

First off, AWWWWWWWW! Thanks for the shout out. :) I feel all giddy inside! XD

Now, onto the review! :) I liked this chapter a lot but, I have a but. I didn't care for the incredible gap made in time. At first it was a few months, then a few years? I mean, were her solo adventures during this period so uninteresting that they weren't worth mentioning or something?

I just felt that this chapter should go into a little bit greater detail of her first few adventures or at least most notable ones and then maybe the next chapter should allude to her running into Team Natsu. Another option would be just to make this chapter longer too. I try to make all of my chapters for Ophiuchus a minimum of 10 pages for example. However, you could always tell me to piss off too, so there's that option.

I'm just worried that with you skipping over such great expanses of time that this story will by finished by chapter 5 when it could easily expand until chapter 20 without getting boring or repetitive if you were to go into more detail. So yeah, I still enjoyed this chapter a lot though and can't wait to see what Team Natsu thinks of "Layla Heart". You know what would actually be funny? If the ice on the floor wasn't created by Gray but by Lyon or something and he and Sherry were there fighting. That would just make me laugh because everyone though for sure it would be Gray, Natsu, and Erza. Although, it may piss some people off so maybe you shouldn't...

I wonder if they'll find her in time. Update soon! Gihehehehe :)

Seems interesting and pretty well-written ;P Eagerly waiting for an update :DD

I'm curious to see what'll happen next :) It begins pretty good :D

Please, update soon! C:

Awww, I wanted to read more! More soon please! :D

AMAZING is all I can say. I find you as a very good & wonderful author.

Woahh ! Amazing story! Please update soon!I'm waiting for Chapter 2! :) (H)

A little shorter than I'd like, but still, you sucked me in from the beginning. I love the whole modern way you spoke of things; bogus excuse is my favorite. This is what a story should be, fluent-written and full of wonderful vocabulary. Take your time with the next chapter, since I want it to be as great, if not better, as this! No pressure, since I know how reader's expectations get to an author.

Good start. I like it except when Lucy mentions that she is going to die. I mean, it so nonchalant it was like she saying, "It's hot outside." or "Gray, please put on some pants." or just something that was no big deal at all.

I felt that part should have been elaborated more like: A) How did she find out that what is wrong with her is fatal? Did she look up? Did someone tell her?

I feel that she should have struggled to learn that information. It doesn't seem like it's a common ailment or occurrence so it should have been difficult to find out about. Maybe you should mention how she poured over medical books and used her special glasses to read them super fast or something.

B) You have also gone into detail about how SHE felt when she learned whatever she had was terminal. Like,

"I didn't believe it when I first read it myself and even though I placed the book aside like had done with so many other medical texts before it, for some reason, I could not group in the pile and instead set it aside on it's own. I did not want to believe that there was nothing I could do except to wait for the inevitable. I had never imagined myself dying yet. I was too young and there were still so many things I wanted to do. However, the books passage kept circulating through my mind, 'The unfortunate mage will begin to suffer extreme bouts of magical energy. At first the influx in energy will only inflict minor injuries and damage upon the victim, dizziness, cuts and scrapes, being the most prevalent symptoms when first emerging. Later it will cause BLAH, BLAH, BLAH (since I don't know quite where the story is going I won't speculate other symptoms), and finally resulting in death.'

Death, it was a heavy word that bared hard upon my shoulder and tasted bitter in mouth before I could even bare to say it out loud but somehow I knew that the passage was referring to me, what I was going through and what become of it."

Anyway, yeah just a thought. Sorry if I'm being too pushy and forward because I kind of feel that I am. Have a good day and I look forward to the next update.

P.S. I really liked everything else from Levy's reaction to Natsu's to everything. :)

please dont let it end like that! MAKE MORE CHAPTERS QQ PLOX!

story is really good!

please update soon

A story? Wohoo finally, update soon. I really love your effort.

Good start. Definitely needs more reviews.