|Reviews for A diffrent kind of slayer|
| Jumi- of-Diamonds chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
Well, first, is this in the right section? This has absolutely nothing to do with American Psycho except maybe the killing? Feels more like a Buffy fanfic to me.
Other than that your chapters are too cluttered. One huge paragraph is very hard on the eyes and difficult to read. The second chapter is a nice example. The last chapter feels like you typed it up for the sake of getting it up here.