Reviews for Closure
LyricalAngelFangirl chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
It's nice to see you write another story focused on Kilbert. I think you do a great job writing him and Annie in these situations.

Yeah, it is weird when he just runs off after you defeat the dragon. "Hey Annie, I'm going to run off now. Have fun getting back." Meanwhile, Annie is all "Ok..." and the third person is like "What the hell...?"

Klaus/Annie is next? That might be good, since his story is just... there. Strike that, his events actually affect possible events. Julian, in the mean time, is just there.

I think the game just has a thing for having secret royals. (Liese, Klaus, Lulu in Lise...although not really...? Back on topic)

I look forward to your next story! :D
PurpleAnnie13 chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Is there gonna be another chapter? I'm really looking forward to it! A tiny percent of missed words, but ultimately nothing to nitpick from too harshly. Please upload soon!