Reviews for Arrangements and Unintentional
Edhla chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Yep, I know: Old Fic is Old, but I'm reviewing it anyway :)

Anyhow, this is a nice little chapter and an enjoyable read. Your expression is clear and you seem confident in your descriptions and your dialogue. There were a few punctuation issues that I found a little confusing- capital letters in odd places, dropped capital letters in others, and no punctuation in some dialogue (for example, "Thank you" instead of "Thank you.") But I think that, those things aside, this is solid work. Thank you for writing it :)